Spike x Twilight fanfic. R&R would be much appreciated!
Seems interesting. Two blatant mistakes I noticed:
Twilight released that during the little outburst, droplets of tears trickled down Spike's face.
realized*
Twilight new from then that he would finally be alright when the arrived back home, but
knew*
I'm rather intrigued by your writing style so lets see how this goes.
Seems interesting. Two blatant mistakes I noticed:
realized*
knew*
I'm rather intrigued by your writing style so lets see how this goes.