"Oh how much more are they going to keep us waiting. Seriously, it is rude to keep a lady waiting." Twilight and Spike turned around to see a familiar face.
"For the past decades, we believed in a possible theory. That a species not from this planet, came here and planted the seeds of life here." The screen then switched to one showing a DNA strand. "Whether or not this was intentional, we have firm evidence that an advanced race had visited this world. For what reason we cannot yet determine but nevertheless, we believe that we are the result of their arrival."
Moar. Best. Intro. Ever. Nothing I've read here wasn't so... understable? It's GOOD. 'nuff said.
Doesn't feel rushed in my opinion.
some grammar mistakes, nothing major, but i would consider revising your chapters if i were you. nonetheless, lets find out where this takes us.
I know a certain BoS scribe who wants a lifetime supply of Fancy Lads snack cakes! Oh, and a dress.
Ron Perlman, not Rob
"Oh how much more are they going to keep us waiting. Seriously, it is rude to keep a lady waiting."
Twilight and Spike turned around to see a familiar face.
And all of a sudden, he's awake.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rarity_lolface.png
At least Butcher Pete didn't play
Was that the Vault Dwellers jumpsuit?
They're so off its funny!