“You can get Sunny’s D later, Rarity!”

Unleash the power of the sun!

For a brief moment, I was deeply concerned about that balloon animal comment.

>Orgasm denial

Patrician fetish

It's refreshing to see someone (else) who can write a scene involving BDSM that is only the *ahem* D aspect. Without consent play, no safeword is needed, and thus we get a very calm and surprisingly tender porn scene of two girls who fit together like two pieces of a puzzle, making room for a third.

Bravo on some great writing, and I can also appreciate the idea of Pinkie Pie bale to mess with Sunset's empathic/vision power—I use that somewhat myself in one of my stories (though there is no dong in that one, Pinkie still uses it to get Sunset all hot and bothered).

There were a few minor grammatical mistakes, but not so much as to take away from the well-crafted little bit of clop here. Bravo.

2.81553/Pi (a little polish and this would be in the 3s)

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“‘Course it ain’t normal. You’re Sunset Shimmer, nothing is normal about you, sugarcube.” Applejack patted Sunset on the arm reassuringly. “We love you anyways though. I don’t know dick about you magicking our brains to like your dick, but it don’t seem like it. Horses or humans, we ain’t nothing but mammals. Mammals love fuckin’. And to be fair, I fucked you , sugarcube.”

https://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=lyrics+you+and+me+baby+ain%27t+nothing+but+mammals&&view=detail&mid=F58850E89C71BD96B53AF58850E89C71BD96B53A&&FORM=VRDGAR

“You can get Sunny’s D later, Rarity!” Rainbow throw up her hands. “It’s Applejack’s and my turn tonight. Now everyone pack up, I’m craving hot dogs and the usual place closes soon.”

Erm...

The hot dog thing was your idea wasn't it?