My only small concern is that the chapters are too short and the victims die too quickly. I'm not expecting a 5,000 word chapter per victim, but a little more bulk to the chapters wouldn't hurt, but that's my opinion. I mean no offense and so far, I'm enjoying the storyline and the tortures. Just maybe torture them more per pony. Truly stretch out their agony.
Wow didn't see that coming. We got Pinkamena, Fluttershy, and Ruby. This is going to be so awesome. Can't wait.
Keep up the good work
Cannot wait!
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I guess so.
My only small concern is that the chapters are too short and the victims die too quickly. I'm not expecting a 5,000 word chapter per victim, but a little more bulk to the chapters wouldn't hurt, but that's my opinion. I mean no offense and so far, I'm enjoying the storyline and the tortures. Just maybe torture them more per pony. Truly stretch out their agony.
927817 XD yeah hes a hard worker...
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I'll see what I can do.
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I sure am.
I sense... Some shipping!
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I'm actually gonna need to know a few things before I kill him/her off:
Color Scheme
Gender
Species
Cutie Mark
Deepest Fear
I've been away for wahile and not reading anything here. But this sounds like it's gonna be awesome (Reading it now)
Well alright then.
I did not see that one coming.
Oh, I commented on chapter 3 when I meant to comment on 1. Oh well. The next chapters (after 3) are gonna be good.
First reaction:
NO WAIT!!! DON'T KILL FLUTTERSHY!
Second reaction:
Oh good, she leaves.
Third reaction:
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Fluttershy AND Pinkamena murdering? This story is great already.
Is blood thorn root differnt in the pony universe?
Okay, read this chapter and can't get shed.mov out of my head.