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Just a dude who writes mainly clop with some action and some GrimDark on the side. Also, If you don’t like futa, you may have a bad time here :P ;)


Comments ( 227 )

oooh! very, very nice! can't wait for more!

I wanna see how crazy this can get...

Oh, it's gonna get crazy, all right.:pinkiecrazy:

I read the first chapter, and I'll I can say... i.ytimg.com/vi/Diavrc2Htes/0.jpg

Good jawb mate

Not enough detail. And please, don't make all the pony's she tortures mares.

If it seems like the majority, if not all, are mares... blame Hasbro and Lauren Faust. I will, if you so wish, make male OCs that can die. Your choice.

928089 What's with the sad face? Seems out of place. Just wondering. And decent first chapter.

I replied to the wrong comment.

928142 My bad then Pinkamena. Just wanted to clear that up.

>>Pinkamena666 OC characters are fine, but there are a lot of background characters to choose from.

Prince Blueblood
Mr. Cake
Flim Flam Bro's
Big Macintosh
Dr. Hooves

When I said not enough eatil I meant with the gore. The rest is fine imo.

I for one am hoping that the majority of victims will be mares. Simply because I love females in a submissive position. :pinkiecrazy:
So far it is awesome. Interested to see how it'll develop.

They don't seem interesting to me. Let me give you a run-down on each.

> Soarin - Don't know much about him. I'd have to make some stuff up.
> Prince Blueblood - I just hate him and have no intention of voicing him unless I become really desperate
> Mr. Cake - Seems boring and not fun to kill. Plus, Pinkamena won't kill the Cakes for reasons later explained.
> Flim Flam Bro's - Hate their guts. Maybe if I become desperate...
> Braeburn - Hate his guts. I know a little about him. I'd have to make some stuff up.
> Big Macintosh - Doesn't say much for the most part.
> Dr. Hooves - COULD work, though I don't know much about him.
> Caramel - Don't know much about him. I'd have to make some stuff up.
> Thunderlane - Don't know much about him. I'd have to make some stuff up.

PS: I knew what you meant by "not enough detail".

Well if you hate Blueblood, Flim-Flam, and braeburn, wouldn't that just be all the more fun torturing and manipulating them any way you please?....:pinkiecrazy:

True. But I really don't want a 2,000 word chapter featuring them. I hate their presence just as much as I hate them personally.

LOL, I see. Well whatever you do I'll probably like it.

I'm really injoying these stories. I like how they are kind of like the challenges from the Saw movies. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Also I;m am writing a story and I don't know how to do Italics and Bolds. I would love it if you would tell me. Please!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Love it. :pinkiehappy:
I feel kind of bad that I am enjoying a story about torture... loljk no I don't. Can't wait to read the next chapter, hope its out soon!

cant whate for the next one :pinkiecrazy:

'Cause you're in it, you turd.

There's a bold and italics button near the top of the edit box along with the underline button. But these won't be available for the story description, so I will give you a list of codes:

(type the codes without spaces)
Bold - [ b ] text goes here [ / b ]
Italics - [ i ] text goes here [ / i ]
Underline - [ u ] text goes here [ / u ]
Font Color - [ color = (color goes here) ] text goes here [ / color ]
Horizontal Line Break - [ hr ]
URL Link - [ url = (url goes here)] text goes here [ / url ]

This is all I can think of at the top of my head. Need any more help, just ask.


Thanks for the help. I'll try that.

Also good luck with the rest of the chapters. Even though I said this already can't wait for the next one.:pinkiehappy:


Just tried using the codes and they work on my story. thanks for all the help.:pinkiehappy: I spent three days trying to figure that stuff out and it was getting annoying.:twilightangry2:

That is a weight off my shoulders so I say again thank you.

The next one's already done. Just needs a TON of editing a fine-tuning.

Also, just because it seems like you may not know, to reply to a comment, you click the Reply button next to the Delete button on the top-right corner of the post pox. Just a little tip. ">>" doesn't work like some are led to believe.:pinkiehappy:

Dude! I'm enjoying this a lot! Keep going!

Ehh... no real motive and just lacks anything real that makes it a good story.... :ajsleepy:Though it may not be part of the Pinkiemaina series... sure feels like it or worsened.

The first two chapters is to get a sense of Pinkamena's new personality. Chapter 3 introduces story and somewhat of a plot.

If people were disappearing and their corpses showing up days latter, I'd take a few hints from Mad-Eye from Harry Potter and carry around a locked flask. Not sure about food, though...
Cupcakes ripoff gets you some extra red. Hope you like the Sith!

Rule number 1 of mysterious disappearances: Don't take handouts. If someone offers you one when people are disappearing, tell them to eat half, thank you very much. If they faint, call the cops. Maybe they didn't spike it, but they definitely know who did. If they pull a knife or a gun on you, shoot to kill.

934212 I give Cupcakes knockoffs a free trip underground, no matter how good the writing is. It may be harsh, but I know that you people can make your own story. Or not. Really, it's getting to the point where I suspect a satire for just these types of knockoffs. It just makes me want to- ARGH!

Mhm... Except the corpses never show up.

How is this a Cupcakes rip-off? Just 'cause it had Pinkamena. If you Dislike and down vote a fic JUST because it has Pinkamena and may seem like a Cupcakes rip-off, you don't deserve to comment or write a review. Thus resulting in your comments meaning diddly-squat.

934484 Insane Pinkie, torturing random citizens, in her basement, magically nobody finds her out because of the screams, no one notices the deaths, not even the landlords, she knocks them out with pastries, she uses lots to decide whom to kill... Shall I continue? I could give many more. If you want absolutely nobody to say it's a copy, or at least heavily based off of Cupcakes, use somebody other than Pinkie, and make it somewhere else than a basement. You know what? Let the commentors decide if this is too much like Cupcakes. One of the noticeable differences that I thought about is that she is more sadistic, and doesn't serve or otherwise use the corpses. However, anything than can be summed up as the following should be slightly changed: :pinkiecrazy: + :rainbowhuh: = :fluttercry::twilightoops::ajsleepy::raritycry:. I shall now take my leave.

Hmm... one last farewell tip... If you don't like Pinkamena fics, DON'T click on a fic with the word Pinkamena in it. If you do, you're just a jerk who enjoys complaining. That is all...

Wow didn't see that coming. We got Pinkamena, Fluttershy, and Ruby. This is going to be so awesome.:rainbowkiss: Can't wait.

Can you murder my oc pokeblox?

My only small concern is that the chapters are too short and the victims die too quickly. I'm not expecting a 5,000 word chapter per victim, but a little more bulk to the chapters wouldn't hurt, but that's my opinion. I mean no offense and so far, I'm enjoying the storyline and the tortures. Just maybe torture them more per pony. Truly stretch out their agony.

927817 XD yeah hes a hard worker...

I sense... Some shipping! :moustache:

I'm actually gonna need to know a few things before I kill him/her off:
Color Scheme
Cutie Mark
Deepest Fear

I've been away for wahile and not reading anything here. But this sounds like it's gonna be awesome (Reading it now)

Well alright then.
I did not see that one coming.

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