In the torrid heat of an August afternoon, a young dragon goes spelunking through the lilac bushes to aid a special friend. Eleven years later the favor is returned, and a liberated heart finds its true path amid the patter of a hazy Manehattan rain.
Great, and innovative use of parallels in this chapter. I've never seen Spike's non-pony nature pointed out in this way before, and you did a great job capturing his personality.
Spike sure is a gentlecolt, Dragon or not.
Great, and innovative use of parallels in this chapter. I've never seen Spike's non-pony nature pointed out in this way before, and you did a great job capturing his personality.
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You're a fast reader my friend, but it occurs to me that you're probably commenting chapter by chapter