So Pinkie died because she and Dash were joking and it caused Dash to become depressed for the remaining years? As much as this story is good it makes not a lot of sense. It needs a little more plot outline and maybe do another chapter or sequel where the Mane five (or four idk) help RD.

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Well I meant for more that their relationship fell apart, Rainbow is an unreliable narrator that remembers that one conversion and its aftermath. Pinkie wanted to have someone to talk to about her problems and Dash was so focused on herself that she never could. More like an unhealthy relationship ending badly and Rainbow being hung up and not understanding what she did wrong.

I'm sorry but... I feel like it was extremely fast pace. Not very good.
I know. Stupid. I'm a hypocrite because my stories are fast pace.
But overall, not my cup of tea. Sorry.
Good idea though!

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Still should have a sequel where they try to help. Hey maybe it could play out that the whole gravestone thing is Dashs imagination telling her "your friendship died with her" and Pinkies actually alive