Interesting so far. Although I noticed that Twilight has yet sought out Princess Celestia's advice on what is happening to her. The fact that Twilight in essence stumbled onto her sexuality and in a way mated with Spike. Also kind of hard not to know what's going on. They are after all humanized ponies. Unless your not giving them the base instincts and or estrus AKfA Heat which is described as a burning need in the Loins for mares with a desire to be mounted and bred. Even women have that desire but never to the extent that a Pony would feel when in heat. If your going about this story as Twilight going through Alicorn Puberty it could be understanding why she's alittle confused and unsure of herself but she would have already gone through puberty as a unicorn. Even according to the cannon Twilight and the Main Six are all adult mares not teens or preteens like the CMC. Now this is just a guestimate but a mares first estrus cycle or first heat happens around 12-14 give or take for the average pony. We don't know the age's of the Main Six even though there was 3 birthday's mentioned in the show but not there ages Twilight, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie all had a birthday so far in the canon episodes yet no age was mentioned how old they turned We know at a guess of how old Sweetie belle is due to the episode when Luna visits Sweetie in a dream. So from this knowledge we know that The main six have at least been through a few estrus cycles and or mating heat. Not much is known about Alicorn's though except Celestia and Luna and Cadence who were the only Alicorns until Twi gained wings good story so far Looking forward to reading more and seeing where you go with this.
8291086 Ah, I see. The chapters name seems to have confused you. which is why I changed it. And don't worry. I'm currently writing the chapter where that happens. This is not about actual puberty and i'm only going to say that much. Thank you very much and it will all be explained soon.
Okay! That's good to know. I hope I didn't come off as rude or anything Like that Yes I was a bit confused about the Original Title of the chapter. Still good but that does bring up a question of how the feelings and sensations Twilight were feeling before um doing the deed the burning in her loins You do not have to say of course, but it almost sounded like Twilight has entered some form of Alicorn Estrus if she hasn't recognized the sensation. Is Twilight in heat and if so is there going to be consequences for the actions taken with Spike and or anypony who happens to get caught up in what Twilight's going through? I know it will be explained as the story goes on so I'm Looking forward to finding out what Twilight's going through and basing what I see of the Title of the story I have a guess. Princess of Friendship with benefits hmmm. Tracking Story and Looking forward to the next chapter.
I thought it was canon that Spike always woke up before Twilight because Twilight would regularly spend all night reading while Spike went to bed early, and that he always made breakfast.
Also, I am regularly irked by their relationship in this story. Spike viewing himself as just an assistant in the last chaper and in this chapter how he thinks a long time about how she'll punish him. First it seems out of place and second.. "Beat him to a pulp"?
Spike can bathe in lava and eats gemstones. In theory, being a dragon means that his body is comparable to plate armor. We have no reason to even humor the idea that Twilight can physically harm Spike even if she wanted to. This almost feels like you are trying to make Spike have a punishment fetish or something.
Also, it should be made more clear that Twilight was in the nude and why she was ok with being as such in front of Spike. Not to mention how she's suddenly in the room at the doorway when she was just in the shower.
the story is really pleasing me, well written I'm curious if this twilight phase can be a particular effect of its state of alicorno ?. I will follow your story with great interest.
Interesting so far. Although I noticed that Twilight has yet sought out Princess Celestia's advice on what is happening to her. The fact that Twilight in essence stumbled onto her sexuality and in a way mated with Spike. Also kind of hard not to know what's going on. They are after all humanized ponies. Unless your not giving them the base instincts and or estrus AKfA Heat which is described as a burning need in the Loins for mares with a desire to be mounted and bred. Even women have that desire but never to the extent that a Pony would feel when in heat. If your going about this story as Twilight going through Alicorn Puberty it could be understanding why she's alittle confused and unsure of herself but she would have already gone through puberty as a unicorn. Even according to the cannon Twilight and the Main Six are all adult mares not teens or preteens like the CMC. Now this is just a guestimate but a mares first estrus cycle or first heat happens around 12-14 give or take for the average pony. We don't know the age's of the Main Six even though there was 3 birthday's mentioned in the show but not there ages Twilight, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie all had a birthday so far in the canon episodes yet no age was mentioned how old they turned We know at a guess of how old Sweetie belle is due to the episode when Luna visits Sweetie in a dream. So from this knowledge we know that The main six have at least been through a few estrus cycles and or mating heat. Not much is known about Alicorn's though except Celestia and Luna and Cadence who were the only Alicorns until Twi gained wings good story so far Looking forward to reading more and seeing where you go with this.
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Ah, I see. The chapters name seems to have confused you. which is why I changed it. And don't worry. I'm currently writing the chapter where that happens. This is not about actual puberty and i'm only going to say that much. Thank you very much and it will all be explained soon.
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Okay! That's good to know. I hope I didn't come off as rude or anything Like that Yes I was a bit confused about the Original Title of the chapter. Still good but that does bring up a question of how the feelings and sensations Twilight were feeling before um doing the deed the burning in her loins You do not have to say of course, but it almost sounded like Twilight has entered some form of Alicorn Estrus if she hasn't recognized the sensation. Is Twilight in heat and if so is there going to be consequences for the actions taken with Spike and or anypony who happens to get caught up in what Twilight's going through? I know it will be explained as the story goes on so I'm Looking forward to finding out what Twilight's going through and basing what I see of the Title of the story I have a guess. Princess of Friendship with benefits hmmm. Tracking Story and Looking forward to the next chapter.
I thought it was canon that Spike always woke up before Twilight because Twilight would regularly spend all night reading while Spike went to bed early, and that he always made breakfast.
Also, I am regularly irked by their relationship in this story. Spike viewing himself as just an assistant in the last chaper and in this chapter how he thinks a long time about how she'll punish him. First it seems out of place and second.. "Beat him to a pulp"?
Spike can bathe in lava and eats gemstones. In theory, being a dragon means that his body is comparable to plate armor. We have no reason to even humor the idea that Twilight can physically harm Spike even if she wanted to. This almost feels like you are trying to make Spike have a punishment fetish or something.
Also, it should be made more clear that Twilight was in the nude and why she was ok with being as such in front of Spike. Not to mention how she's suddenly in the room at the doorway when she was just in the shower.
the story is really pleasing me, well written I'm curious if this twilight phase can be a particular effect of its state of alicorno ?. I will follow your story with great interest.
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Feel free to continue reading. The story is finished as of today. I hope you enjoy!