Charming Thunder awoke standing on a cliff in a starry battle between the Mephiles Alliance and the Equestrian Empire. He looked around to see that they are not moving and turned around to see a human figure walking up to him. "I have always loved the stars," the figure said. Charming Thunder was shocked to see him as he took a step back.
"I've heard of you," Charming Thunder said. "Danny has told me so much about you before he died. You can't fool me."
"It is not my desire to deceive you. Once I had many names. Tenebre, Vitiate the Sith Emperor. Now am called Valkorion. You're much like a Jedi I have seen. Ever since your brother died, my spirit was free from him. So I decided to follow you so we can speak undisturbed."
"You're not the same person I have heard of. What's changed?"
"Everything. You most of all." Valkorion walked to the edge of the cliff as Charming Thunder followed. Across from the cliff, Charming Thunder can see his friends and family fighting the Mephiles Alliance droids and soldiers. "Your friends and family. You gave their lives purpose and meaning." Charming Thunder's eyes widened after hearing that statement. "The loyal Wonderbolt, a cowardly caretaker, an honest farmpony, a party lover, the fashionista, and the princess of friendship. Together, you formed the Elements of Harmony. But now, you are complete."
"You know all of my secrets then. This also means you know that I love my family."
"Even Jedi can violate the code. But you are no Jedi. Love withers when it is neglected. Left alone too long, love will seek another."
"Me, Applejack, Twilight, Sunset, Lucina, and Light will always be together."
"They can drift further out of reach each day. Without a center to hold...without us, your world and all within it spiral into chaos." The two then teleport in front of Charming Thunder's friends which are now lying dead on the ground. "You have spent you life for years as a king. This is where it will soon lead. Will it be worth it for this war?"
"I will do what it takes to protect them. Even other ponies." A chuckle was heard as Charming Thunder looked around. The environment then began to change as Charming Thunder stood. He then walked to the edge to see Ponyville.
"You cannot save your brother now. He was a cradle of corruption before you met him. I never understood him at first ever since he became Cyber Eclipse. Why do still care for him?"
"He is my brother. I defend peace and justice. I protect innocent ponies from harm." Valkorion appeared behind Charming Thunder.
"And they squander his sacrifice you made. Why continue the war without him? What do you hope to achieve in the end?"
"This is not about me, Valkorion."
"It should be. You are a far superior leader than any prince or princess."
"Why am I listening to a Sith who destroyed worlds?"
"I am no Sith. We have a greater purpose."
"We?"
"There is someone in Equestria that can help you. But she has been gone for a thousand years. Now she is a mere crystal statue waiting to be rebuilt. This 'Princess of the Crystal Empire' can help you win this war."
"If you are not referring to my sister, then who?" Valkorion smiled as Charming Thunder felt the ground shake which forced him to kneel as imperial soldiers aimed their weapons at him as ponies watched.
"You once left your home. But do they forgive you for leaving them?"
"I'm not afraid. This just a bad dream."
"You're quite right, my friend. But you cannot stop it. Save yourself." Valkorion disappeared as Charming Thunder activated his lightsaber and deflected some blaster fire back at the imperial soldiers. He then ran to the castle courtyard until he encountered Princess Celestia with her lightsaber active. Charming Thunder leaps towards Celestia with a strike as she blocked it. They clashed until Charming Thunder was able to stab her in the chest in defense. Celestia collapsed to the ground. Charming Thunder stood over Celestia with his eyes widened. "No authority but your own, no obligation but to yourself. Do not be afraid. Tell me how it fells."
"Makes me want to kill you next. Celestia is my aunt and the princess of Equestria. A great leader."
"You refuse to admit the truth. So be it." Charming Thunder was about to strike at Valkorion, but he looked up to see a tower collapsing down on him. He shuts his eyes and then opened them a few seconds later now standing in a different environment. He recognized the are as the island where he fought Cyber Eclipse. "The island which you stand is where you fought your own brother. This is where everything changed for Equestria. Where you murdered your own brother."
"You helped my brother, did you?"
"He asked for my power. I have passed beyond death's reach many times."
"I've been told that both Jedi and Sith have sought immortality. What makes you the exception?"
"I am not hindered by the teachings of failures. I no longer require crude vessels. I was once free."
"Why did you choose to visit me?"
"I came to help you."
"Why would you do that?"
"You were the only one who has ever matched my will to survive."
"Stop comparing yourself to me. You are just a false emperor."
"You cannot deny that we share a common goal. To end Mephiles' war. But in order for that to happen, you must seek the crystal princess. Only she can help you." The ground began to shake as Valkorion vanishes.
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Charming Thunder woke up in shock in his bed when Sunset shook him. "What is it, dear?" Sunset asked as Applejack and Twilight entered the room.
"It's another one of those bad dreams is it?" Applejack said. Charming Thunder looked at his wives and nodded.
"Yes," Charming Thunder replied. "But you wouldn't believe me if I told you what it was."
"Was it that bad?" Twilight asked as she nudged Charming Thunder.
"No." Thinking about what Valkorion said, there is a lot of work to be done.
Man, no matter how many people dislike this series, or post hateful comments about it, you never waiver.
Gotta respect that.
And the adventures of Charming Thunder the Gary Stu continues. Seems you forgot about the thing we discussed about him getting an apprentice, or at the very least a successor. Charming has been through 15 stories in thing series alone, not even counting literally all the other stories you've written. And in none of them does Charming's character change in any substantial way. He was a Gary Stu when he was introduced and he's a Gary Stu now. I think it's almost time to move on to a different character as the focus. You can still have him in your stories, as he could be a great mentor figure for a new hero, but his story just seems to be dragging on and on. He's not a compelling character. He's not dynamic, as he doesn't go through any changes in character. He is boring.
Believe me, if I can create a great character, you can too. Example: In an original story I'm working on, the main character is at first completely inexperienced in surviving her home kingdom. But after monster destroy her village, and she has no choice but to travel with a strange, but kind and wise-beyond-her-years huntress, she begins to become stronger and forms a mother/daughter relationship with the huntress. She grows as a character. However, she is still flawed, as she later learns that the person who summoned the monsters to attack her village was her semi-evil twin sister. Naturally, she is angry, and she lashes out at her sister, revealing a darker form of herself. Not an evil form, I should mention, just darker. But she eventually comes to forgive her sister, as she was jut following the villain's orders, and together, they team up to put an end to the villain's reign of terror. The story will be more complex than that, of course, but you get the point.
8245264 like i told you, i am waiting until the time comes.
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This is literally Charming's 26th story, and you seem to have run out of Star Wars characters for Charming to face off against and have resorted to using characters from other other franchises, such as Code Geass, Sonic the Hedgehog, Fire Emblem, and even Warcraft. Who's next? Kirito? Well, come to think about it, Charming Thunder and Kirito have about the same levels of personality, and emo-ness. Charming likes to cosplay into battle as Darth Vader, Kirito wears all black no matter which world he's in. Charming is related to Equestrian royalty and in OP, Kirito is OP. They're a perfect match. The only difference is Charming has only one love interest, while Kirito has a whole harem (including his sister/cousin, which is weird).
8250292 i don't plan on bringing characters from sword art online. if you don't like my stories then you should just leave me alone about my character.
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It's not that the stories are bad, it's just that the main character isn't interesting anymore, and unfortunately that has a direct impact effect on the story. We know he's going to win in the end, so there is little suspence. The stories aren't bad, but the main character has no real conflict that he can't overcome. The enemy might as well give up immediatly upon learning he has entered the fray, because he always wins, and we know that. We can't get as invested in the story.