Thanks man, it was fun writing this with you

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yeah man, it fun and very Fapable!

Gotta say, despite the slightly short story, with possibly hints of rp writing style of how lacking the detail was in term of how he 'bought' her and how this seem to be the norm, unless this was a pet play fetish-- I can honestly say that I'm slightly interested in this.

I will be keeping an eye on this. You need to put the Second Person tag though.

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noted

I like this Ill give you two hat tips *hat tip,Pinkie tips hat*

I may regret this later but ill keep track of this, although its a rough start, not a huge fan of extreme fetishes like in this one.
Maybe add a "list of content" at the start of each chapter? if possible that is. Just giving some ideas.

As much fun as this is, there's a LOT of unanswered questions I have.

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hmmmm?

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What's the height ratio? Are they actually pets, or a fetish thing? Is it in Equestria or Earth? and most importantly, will there be Derpy?

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well their height is a average human women height.

Well personally yeah they are, in a fetish way i guess.

The clopfic is placed on earth.

Dont know if they'll be derpy

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But Muffins? We've had milk, so WE NEED MUFFINS!!!

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You have to wait... until other chapters

8234837
Oh, I didnt knew that you edited this with my friend

Can you do more please