Twilight Sparkle finds herself in a strange wasteland, the remnants of a world long destroyed. She must survive and find a way home with the aid of the tribal descendants of once immense super powers. Only time will tell if she is successful.
I can see, why some may dislike it, due the change from the previous stories and period in which the story takes place comparatively to our history, or they could just be disliking because they disliked the thermo-arcane apocalypse the last story ended on. But I digress, I enjoy the story so far and not just because of the world you've made with the previous stories. Dominic's story was awesome, but this is Altair's story and it's shaping up to great. So in short just keep working on the story to how you want it, this story is yours. We, the readers, are only recipients to what you produce. You shouldn't have to bend the story or your writing to our demands.
I don't really see any problems in this story.
It gives a profound sense of loss to me in knowing that so much tech and life was lost even so long after a cataclysmic war.
The ponies, the poor ponies were finally coming to terms with real liberty, all of it stripped away by some mad princess with delusions of freedom.
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Thanks man. I really appreciate the support at the moment.
I can see, why some may dislike it, due the change from the previous stories and period in which the story takes place comparatively to our history, or they could just be disliking because they disliked the thermo-arcane apocalypse the last story ended on. But I digress, I enjoy the story so far and not just because of the world you've made with the previous stories. Dominic's story was awesome, but this is Altair's story and it's shaping up to great. So in short just keep working on the story to how you want it, this story is yours. We, the readers, are only recipients to what you produce. You shouldn't have to bend the story or your writing to our demands.