im glad you kept writing

8176235 Thanks, and glad you liked this story. I might take a long break after this one though. If I get another scenario in mind, or request that's within my power, I'll write another one.

Another great story :) Wonderful work.

At this point, the only reason I have to live is for these stories. Please never stop.

nice work

Why the fuck does this exist?

8176540 It got dislikes for the fetish content, like most fetish stories do, from people who never even read them.

8177023 of course the dislikes at from the fact its a fetish story. I honestly challenge some one to find a scat or watersports story with more likes then dislikes.

The stories themselves have nothing to do with the ratings imo. They're writing quite well. Better then anything I could do.

8177243 I admit my scat stories might not be as good (Come to think of it I should probably merge them too), but I'd like to think I'm doing better at the watersports ones than when I first started

Even alicorn-strength bladders are no match for Twilight's sense of princessly duty.

8177671 You can definitely tell you've improved!

Wow, at least in my opinion, this is one of the best desperation stories I've read. I loved it all, how the desperation was building up, how Twilight refused to relieve herself each time, overall, great story!