It's a great start. I'd like to see where this goes.

Well it's a little ooc
But who cares, it's funny and has my two fave ships. It would be great to see you continue this.

I hope to see discord scheme with celestia about setting the lovebird up

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Thank you soooo much, that means a lot to me... I seldom tell my FAMILY that I'm writing a story, let alone post said story on a public site!

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Well then, I would encourage you to be a little more brave. Your work was enjoyable to read and I'm keen to see where it goes

good start,
I surprise that celestia did say "shiny armor owe me 50 bits" or something silly like that,
cant wait for maor

I really enjoy this story and hope it countines

Loving this story so far. I would love to see more.

Please continue, TwiLuna is my favorite ship and I can't get enough of these.

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I honestly couldn't agree more!! they're so freaking adorkable together!!

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Update?

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I'll update it sometime before I die, that's all the info you're getting at this point
(I gotta deal with high school first, then I will put as much time as necessary into getting the next chapter out, pinkie promise!!)