Damn, that's a fabulous scene. I think you chose well in using the Artemis/Dusk scene for the original story, for the reasons you stated and because I like the more explicit D/s overtones of the other one. However, I really like the interaction between the brothers, especially the conversation at the end. So por que no los dos? With some tinkering this scene could lead straight into the final scene of the original story. The forced immobilization aspect of this scene acts as a softer intro to the subject, and after the action here and earlier with Solaris, I could imagine Dusk being ready to go again...
8124585 Thank you! The next few bits I have ready to post are straight (ish) but there will definitely be more M/M down the road, I really love gay pairings, and the alicorns are pretty much my personal favorite.
Damn, that's a fabulous scene. I think you chose well in using the Artemis/Dusk scene for the original story, for the reasons you stated and because I like the more explicit D/s overtones of the other one. However, I really like the interaction between the brothers, especially the conversation at the end. So por que no los dos? With some tinkering this scene could lead straight into the final scene of the original story. The forced immobilization aspect of this scene acts as a softer intro to the subject, and after the action here and earlier with Solaris, I could imagine Dusk being ready to go again...
Regardless, well done!
You write some really sexy stuff, i hope there will be more gay alicorn incest~ (I loved "Between day and night")
8124585 Thank you! The next few bits I have ready to post are straight (ish) but there will definitely be more M/M down the road, I really love gay pairings, and the alicorns are pretty much my personal favorite.
8124599 Yes please! And thank you, may your hands forever produce first class smut