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SPark
Not checking in here. I may post stories because my patrons are nice and like ponies. Otherwise out of the fandom, sorry peeps.
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Should have a sex tag, also it's labeled as complete.
8119946 Oops! I can't believe I forgot the tag.
The complete label is kinda... like what's there is complete, it's not a half-finished story. So it seems wrong to call it "incomplete" when it's not.
8119950 I think you should put incomplete though cause people understand that its not just that story, but more an anthology of a bunch. Though with me saying that it could be the oppostie too and people understand theres more being added even witht he complete tag
8120350 Well, since that's the only feedback I'm getting on this, I'll change it. But if people start commenting to say it should be marked as compete, I will throw things.
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omg IF ITS' A COMMPLET STORY THEAN JUST MARK IT AS DOME!!!!!!!
/s
8120945 *Throws a desk at you*
This was enjoyable! Far more varied than I imagined it would be; her inhibitions falling as her arousal rises is very realistic. Excellent writing and thanks for picking my suggestion!
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Yeah, I thought that might be the case. I was certainly reminded. 
Honestly I was struggling with suggesting something at all. My first thoughts went to far more kinkier stuff, but I had already seen lots of stories with those kinks, and niche kinks weren't likely to gain the needed upvotes.
8121237 Being into niche fetishes can be very frustrating! As a reader you can never find anything for them, and as a writer, nobody likes them.
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There are fetishes that seem common here that I can't imagine seeing outside the FiMF or Furry or Hentai community, either. Evolution of such communities and how they overlap and spread ideas sounds like a fascinating subject. I think this is memetics, similar to genetics?
That said I gave you a practically kink-free prompt and you still managed to hit some of mine. Kudos.
8121281 What can I say, I'm a kinky sort of person!
I wouldn't mind you doing a full Princest clopfic with Dom/sub tones
8121721 I wouldn't mind either! I like writing Celestia.
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I concur with "incomplete," even though the pieces themselves are complete. When I see a story anthology labeled "complete" I typically assume the author doesn't plan to add more, and won't track it; incomplete lets me know that there may be more and I should keep an eye out.
I really like that you addressed this, even in a short vignette. There is certainly some good Twilestia romance out there, but unless the story addresses this issue explicitly (and has a good way around it) I just can't get invested in it.
Damn, that's a fabulous scene. I think you chose well in using the Artemis/Dusk scene for the original story, for the reasons you stated and because I like the more explicit D/s overtones of the other one. However, I really like the interaction between the brothers, especially the conversation at the end. So por que no los dos? With some tinkering this scene could lead straight into the final scene of the original story. The forced immobilization aspect of this scene acts as a softer intro to the subject, and after the action here and earlier with Solaris, I could imagine Dusk being ready to go again...
Regardless, well done!
8123991 I tend to measure how well a Twilestia works by how well it deals with this, tbh. Though I do sometimes admittedly "cheat" in my own stories and just sort of "noodle incident" their getting together and proceed with the assumption they've been a couple for a while. You can only write the same "finally confess their love" story so many times. I figure I've done it twice (one I still need to finish and publish) and that should suffice.
You write some really sexy stuff, i hope there will be more gay alicorn incest~ (I loved "Between day and night")
8124585 Thank you! The next few bits I have ready to post are straight (ish) but there will definitely be more M/M down the road, I really love gay pairings, and the alicorns are pretty much my personal favorite.
8124599 Yes please! And thank you, may your hands forever produce first class smut
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This is very true, and one reason I'm always looking for new approaches to romance stories. To be fair, it's easy to mess up an "already together" story... someone (my brain wants to say WD but I'm not sure if that's right) wrote a long blog post way back about screwing up romance, and one of the big ones for me is authors who don't give the characters reasons to love each other. That's something that's a lot easier to address when you're directly showing the getting-together, not so easy when it's all in the past. One of the first romances I ever read - and still on my all-time top list - is bats' Spellbound Fireflies. There is the whole Scoots romance subplot and Twidash backstory, but by and large the romance aspect of the story is about familial love and maintaining a relationship. But despite that it manages to avoid the typical romance blunders without being the same old confess-their-love story.
Anyway, long tangent there. I think you've done a marvelous job here, and write great romance in general, so keep it up!
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You should do more boring plain scandal - free sex
Just joking, you know me
Anyway stoopit qvestion
PIV? never heard that abravaion before
8126143 He he. It means "penis in vagina". Regular old sex, rather than anal or oral or whatever.
just to know
what is the point of having "view mature content" enabled when site asked me to confirm if I'm of age and want to check this story?
it didn't happened before...
Wish this was longer, as princest is the best, and submissive Celestia, even though quite common, feels very natural and enjoyable.
By the way, your reversed chapter guide confused me a little (ordered 4321 while the chapters are 1234).
8127308 Well, it's so that the newer ones are at the top, where they're more visible... that may have been a silly idea, really.
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Yeah, I understood the reasoning when I figured it out. It's just a bit less intuitive, I think? I should probably just read better.
I read below that you wouldn't mind writing a real princest story. Is that something that might actually be happening? There's a real princest drought on this site, and I'm thirsty. :P
(edit: Oh damn, I see you've updated Ember's! Awesome.)
8127358 I'll at least do a not-just-imaging Quickies Princest piece at some point soon. As for a longer work, I really want to, but time, idea, and motivation have yet to line up. I don't want to churn out something formulaic, but I don't have any really good, unique ideas for how to write an actual story about the two of them and not just plotless sex.
8127013 That setting's per-browser, not per-user. Even if you're logged in on two devices you'll have to set it on both.
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but it happens on the same compute I use for more than a year
Blog post with associated art, for people who don't have tagged blogs enabled or find this collection a while from now.
8152176 I should probably link that in the author's note or something.
Sorry for nitpicking
Fourth paragraph from bottom, second last line
" He cock pulsed "
Feel free to delete this once corrected. I am never sure if to post this in comments or PM
Some writers are rather to not see corrections in coments.
Where be more of dem princest quickies, yo?
What a fun and varied collection. Have another like ;)