100 Years ago a there was peace in equestria, ruled by the heavenly godlike being of Celestia and Luna. But since their disappearance. Nothing but war has been brought up on this land. The 6 largest factions all vying for power...
Well, I do like how you've got it going so far. A little writers tip, explain what you need to and leave the rest to be found later if you can.
As for everything else, I could recommend a little spacing, just a little and numbers (one, two, eleven, etc) Otherwise, it looks great.
Lots of errors, but otherwise good so far.
Well, I do like how you've got it going so far. A little writers tip, explain what you need to and leave the rest to be found later if you can.
As for everything else, I could recommend a little spacing, just a little and numbers (one, two, eleven, etc) Otherwise, it looks great.
Lots of errors, but otherwise good so far.