I cannot resist:

Behold Fluttershy's new nickname: Shystreak.

human incarnation of something

I think you mean oR.

Hm, not quite sure what to make of this after only a single chapter, but you're at the metaphorical helm, and I've read previous examples of your work, and this reminds me of Sunset Shimmer's Naked Mile. Except that one involved a lot more shenanigans, and Sunset didn't quite get aroused by her situation.

Nice chapter and story. I look forward to read more.

Oh, and Janitor, here's a good advise:

Next time, do your work without the headphones.

So I guess Sunset's not the only streaker in the Rainbooms.

Loved it as always Sapphire.

A lot of fun so far. Love of Fluttershy really got into it. Oh am confused as to what happened to her towel, she took one wit her when she went to shower.

*presses the tracking button* ....For later. .////.

Who made the picture?

I mean

You write this more than once, but it doesn't belong in a third-person narrative.

I have no other comment because while I was curious, the story turned out not to be my thing.

Well... I'm aroused... okay ._.

7954316 I did.

When will the next chapter be released?

i love this! plz continue!

Brilliant! This is what a streaking story is supposed to look like. Logical setup, funny, just naughty enough. I've seen dismal streaking stories that just fail on every level, but this? This is perfect.

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You have no idea how much of an honor it is to hear you say that. It makes me want to revive this and begin working on it again.