Like the concept. Sunlight is always a nice ship to read clop of.
Just a suggestion: I understand that writing clop is awesome and stuff, and you want to get it down the moment you start, but do try to not rush things. I don't mean that you shouldn't write rushed clop, but that you shouldn't rush your writing. Everything happened so quickly I didn't have time to properly enjoy =(
But, anyway, you have potential, so keep writing and you'll just get better over time! ^u^
7943253 Thank you for the advice and for the compliment about me having potetional. I'm new to clop writing so it's gonna take a few tries before I get into a good rhythm.
Say, I've come to know that a little help from a friend makes wonders in one's writing. So, if you're interested, I'd be glad to help you out with it. You know, as proofreader, or just as a friendly adviser, whatever's good for you. If you like the idea, PM me
Like the concept. Sunlight is always a nice ship to read clop of.
Just a suggestion: I understand that writing clop is awesome and stuff, and you want to get it down the moment you start, but do try to not rush things. I don't mean that you shouldn't write rushed clop, but that you shouldn't rush your writing. Everything happened so quickly I didn't have time to properly enjoy =(
But, anyway, you have potential, so keep writing and you'll just get better over time! ^u^
What if they are in the school gym's showers?
7943253 Thank you for the advice and for the compliment about me having potetional. I'm new to clop writing so it's gonna take a few tries before I get into a good rhythm.
7943688 Thanks.
7943623 No problem.
Say, I've come to know that a little help from a friend makes wonders in one's writing. So, if you're interested, I'd be glad to help you out with it. You know, as proofreader, or just as a friendly adviser, whatever's good for you. If you like the idea, PM me
A bit fast paced here but the rest is purr~dy good.^^
Damn that was really hot 😳
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If you think that was hot, check out the sequel.