A vast darkness is approaching. It is up to the next generation of the Mane 6 to stop it. Will they be ready, or will the world know ruin? Cover Art by Vavacung
I appreciate that you are novellizing Vacavung's (LoveLess) comics, but as long as you have his permission, make the story your own. We already know the story thanks to the comics, for there are points where you could go into a little depth with them. But now it needs a little of your touch.
This in generaly reminds me of Turnabout Storm, even to the point where the Youtube videos were around long before the novellization of it in the fanfic by the same name (and apparently one in the 1000+ Upvote Club for starters).
7909246 Don't worry, I have actually brought this up to him. He said it is fine as long as he is credited and a link to his DA is present. As for putting my own spin on things, don't worry. I've got plenty of ideas on how to do that. For right now, I felt the best way to introduce new stuff into this is to take things slow. Start with what is familiar and expand upon it and add new ideas as I go along. By the third chapter, there will be one and a half new scenes as well as an extension on the ones already present. I wonder if anyone took notice of the 'next time' section in the authors notes... Honestly, I do spoil a bit in those, even if what is there is out of context dialogue.
That's cool. Personally, I'm kinda looking forward to how Sparity reacts to meeting Alternative Dawn for the first time. Maybe the little quips of Nightmare Rarity shipping the two already may be a little different from the comics, like how maybe Sparity may have a little crush on Dawn (as opposed to the comic when from jump it was straight up confrontations and hostility). And I see that we have Aerial Ace, Super Surprise, and Apple Eden, so we are looking forward to Dawn as well as Little AJ. Also, it would be nice to see if Serene (if she shows up) is actually an actual dragoness with wings or if she's gonna be a wyvern (her arms are wings).
Real quick observation: is the Anthro tag there for Little AJ only, or is it that all the characters are anthropomorphized? It would be interesting to see all of the characters as anthro, especially a much-older Spike and NM Rarity. What can I say, NM Rarity in anthro form blows me away at times , and I would love to see or imagine Sparity in anthro form (both her pony form and her dragon form).
7927225 Perhaps I should have been specific. Yes, the anthro tag is for Lil AJ, as she will be in a lot of stuff later on in the story. Rightfully so, she is a part of the main cast and has the unique power to combine with her allies. It'll be vary useful in the future ;)
I appreciate that you are novellizing Vacavung's (LoveLess) comics, but as long as you have his permission, make the story your own. We already know the story thanks to the comics, for there are points where you could go into a little depth with them. But now it needs a little of your touch.
This in generaly reminds me of Turnabout Storm, even to the point where the Youtube videos were around long before the novellization of it in the fanfic by the same name (and apparently one in the 1000+ Upvote Club for starters).
Just an opinion.
7909246 Don't worry, I have actually brought this up to him. He said it is fine as long as he is credited and a link to his DA is present. As for putting my own spin on things, don't worry. I've got plenty of ideas on how to do that. For right now, I felt the best way to introduce new stuff into this is to take things slow. Start with what is familiar and expand upon it and add new ideas as I go along. By the third chapter, there will be one and a half new scenes as well as an extension on the ones already present. I wonder if anyone took notice of the 'next time' section in the authors notes... Honestly, I do spoil a bit in those, even if what is there is out of context dialogue.
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That's cool. Personally, I'm kinda looking forward to how Sparity reacts to meeting Alternative Dawn for the first time. Maybe the little quips of Nightmare Rarity shipping the two already may be a little different from the comics, like how maybe Sparity may have a little crush on Dawn (as opposed to the comic when from jump it was straight up confrontations and hostility). And I see that we have Aerial Ace, Super Surprise, and Apple Eden, so we are looking forward to Dawn as well as Little AJ. Also, it would be nice to see if Serene (if she shows up) is actually an actual dragoness with wings or if she's gonna be a wyvern (her arms are wings).
Real quick observation: is the Anthro tag there for Little AJ only, or is it that all the characters are anthropomorphized? It would be interesting to see all of the characters as anthro, especially a much-older Spike and NM Rarity. What can I say, NM Rarity in anthro form blows me away at times , and I would love to see or imagine Sparity in anthro form (both her pony form and her dragon form).
7927225 Perhaps I should have been specific. Yes, the anthro tag is for Lil AJ, as she will be in a lot of stuff later on in the story. Rightfully so, she is a part of the main cast and has the unique power to combine with her allies. It'll be vary useful in the future ;)