Twilight Sparkle goes to a nature resort with her brother, Shining Armor. But it turns out that it's not a nature resort. It's a NATURIST resort! Stuck there, they'll have to survive the weekend together. (If they don't die of embarrassment first!)
Shining took a deep breath and held it as he dipped below the water's surface. He reached out with his hands and felt for Twilight. He briefly got a handful of her butt before moving lower to her legs. There was only the briefest moment of hesitation from her before she spread her legs and he moved his head between them. He planted his feet into the sandy floor of the lake and stood up. Twilight held his head with her hands to steady herself as her weight settled on him. But her frame was light, and he was strong. He had no trouble supporting her.
Oh hoh hoh. This could be so taken out of context. Good story mate. Amazing job.
""Okay, good. I have one team left, but we're short one girl," she said, pulling her leg back in a different pose that had her heel at the back of her hear while she leaned sideways. It took every ounce of his willpower to keep his eye looking up at hers."
I'm not sure what word "hear" is supposed to be, here. Head, probably?
Also, like I mentioned (read: rambled about) in chapter 1, no one would have been upset with him if he had looked. In fact, that would have been on HER for (potentially) being intentionally provocative.
Shining remembered how diligent Cadance had been about wearing her bras. There were more than a few times when he had wanted her ….(to)…..forego the "accessory" and go bra-less, but she always protested, explaining how much she needed it. It was clear to him now just how necessary it was. He felt bad about how ignorant he had acted before. She had a couple lacy ones that she had worn when they first started going out. But most of them were plain, and thick. They had to be to handle the heft of her full D cups.
"No, I don't just mean a hole in your body. I mean like... a hole in you . Your being. Your soul. Like you're missing a piece of... maybe not yourself , but something. And it leaves you wanting... craving for something to fill it."
Twilight's on the other hand were in that indeterminate place between a B and C cup. The larger felt a bit too loose on her, and the smaller had her practically spilling out. But there was nothing wrong with them. It was the bras that were flawed. Her breasts were perfect.
Oh hoh hoh. This could be so taken out of context. Good story mate. Amazing job.
I came!
""Okay, good. I have one team left, but we're short one girl," she said, pulling her leg back in a different pose that had her heel at the back of her hear while she leaned sideways. It took every ounce of his willpower to keep his eye looking up at hers."
I'm not sure what word "hear" is supposed to be, here. Head, probably?
Also, like I mentioned (read: rambled about) in chapter 1, no one would have been upset with him if he had looked. In fact, that would have been on HER for (potentially) being intentionally provocative.
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thats... thats actually quite deep
Shining probably doesn't know this, but studies have shown that most women don't wear bras that properly fit. That could also be part of the problem.
Either
Credit where it's due, he thought. She is braver than I realized. (possibly She's, depending on the tone of thought you want to convey)
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Credit where it's due, he thought. She was braver than he realized. (or semicolon, since they're independent but related clauses)
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Wasnt it implied that Shining wasnt a virgin? If he wasnt, then why would he have never seen a female orgasm before?
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Not all girls squirt.
Damnit Shakespearicles! I wish I knew how to quit you!.
my dick cant get any harder