7978482 I'm really enjoying this story so far. I like how it's not mainly clop, and where there is clop, it's done in a romantic fashion. Plus showing former high-class ponies not being afraid of getting hooves dirty is something I admire. Diamond Tiara could take some notes from the Oranges. In fact, I would encourage writing her in in some way since her farther may have business with the Oranges or heard about their downfall. Another thing I like is how well Valencia was written. She's smart, frugal, patient, strong willed, and supportive. I see much from her in the future.
In all, this story reminds me of something that happened back in 2007. January 13th to be exact. A guy started a traveling anime convention to raise money for Komen Breast Cancer. He had art contests for people to win game systems. Even a cosplayer was getting interviewed by MTV there. Come to find out that it was all a scam. The hotel didn't even know about it. 200 people showed up along with an anime DJ from Florida and a couple of voice actors. The con man (Jeffery Borncamp) ran off with about $5000 on that day. It was embarrassing for the anime community to say the least. To this day, I still want to track thet guy down and do Pinkemina things to him. But anyway, I hope this story is a long one. Keep up the good work. You've earned a follower. PToN
8057552 : An 'alternative couples experience' is, in this sense, a safe haven for those couples who have interests that are not considered normal by the mainstream society. Here specifically making love outdoors, as well as having an audience durring the act. Basically it is a club of like minded exibitionists who will not look down on Ponies for just being themselves. Not to be confused with a 'swingers' club, Green Acres is aimed specifically at couples, not individuals looking for a quick fling.
8059609 : To me, the clop is a point of character development, rather than the whole reason for the story (At least in this tale). It was important to me to be able to show that the Oranges are comfortable enough with their own sexuality to be able to justify opening their land to others for experimentation.
I tried to make the Orange's transition from city to country seem natural, and smooth. Due to Mosley being raised here, I saw no need to draw from the 'fish out of water' well. As far as Valencia, thank you, my head cannon has her just as described in the story. While this story was planned as a one off short story, it has grown beyond any so-called plan and has grown to the point that charicters may just spill over into future projects.
I had not heard about that scam before. That is rather depressing. Just as Mosley observed, with the amount of effort put into scamming people/Ponies, perpetrators could just as easily create something real.
Thank you very much for watching, I will do my best to make it interesting for you. Heh, heh.
I usually don't read stories until they're either completed or at least over 100,000 words. Too many are abandoned unfinished, so I haven't read yours yet. However, for ideas, you might try the Brit coms To The Manor Born (rich woman loses money & has to sell most of her estate) and The Good Neighbors (sort of the British take on the idea behind Green Acres)
8517849 Really, that is much appreciated! I know I have little to complain about when the authors I read don't update frequently, but this one isn't abandoned yet, Pinkie Promise.
What's an alternative couples experience?
7978482 I'm really enjoying this story so far. I like how it's not mainly clop, and where there is clop, it's done in a romantic fashion. Plus showing former high-class ponies not being afraid of getting hooves dirty is something I admire. Diamond Tiara could take some notes from the Oranges. In fact, I would encourage writing her in in some way since her farther may have business with the Oranges or heard about their downfall.
Another thing I like is how well Valencia was written. She's smart, frugal, patient, strong willed, and supportive. I see much from her in the future.
In all, this story reminds me of something that happened back in 2007. January 13th to be exact. A guy started a traveling anime convention to raise money for Komen Breast Cancer. He had art contests for people to win game systems. Even a cosplayer was getting interviewed by MTV there. Come to find out that it was all a scam. The hotel didn't even know about it. 200 people showed up along with an anime DJ from Florida and a couple of voice actors. The con man (Jeffery Borncamp) ran off with about $5000 on that day. It was embarrassing for the anime community to say the least. To this day, I still want to track thet guy down and do Pinkemina things to him.
But anyway, I hope this story is a long one. Keep up the good work. You've earned a follower.
PToN
8057552 :
An 'alternative couples experience' is, in this sense, a safe haven for those couples who have interests that are not considered normal by the mainstream society. Here specifically making love outdoors, as well as having an audience durring the act. Basically it is a club of like minded exibitionists who will not look down on Ponies for just being themselves. Not to be confused with a 'swingers' club, Green Acres is aimed specifically at couples, not individuals looking for a quick fling.
8059609 :
To me, the clop is a point of character development, rather than the whole reason for the story (At least in this tale). It was important to me to be able to show that the Oranges are comfortable enough with their own sexuality to be able to justify opening their land to others for experimentation.
I tried to make the Orange's transition from city to country seem natural, and smooth. Due to Mosley being raised here, I saw no need to draw from the 'fish out of water' well. As far as Valencia, thank you, my head cannon has her just as described in the story. While this story was planned as a one off short story, it has grown beyond any so-called plan and has grown to the point that charicters may just spill over into future projects.
I had not heard about that scam before. That is rather depressing. Just as Mosley observed, with the amount of effort put into scamming people/Ponies, perpetrators could just as easily create something real.
Thank you very much for watching, I will do my best to make it interesting for you. Heh, heh.
I usually don't read stories until they're either completed or at least over 100,000 words. Too many are abandoned unfinished, so I haven't read yours yet. However, for ideas, you might try the Brit coms To The Manor Born (rich woman loses money & has to sell most of her estate) and The Good Neighbors (sort of the British take on the idea behind Green Acres)
8517849
Really, that is much appreciated! I know I have little to complain about when the authors I read don't update frequently, but this one isn't abandoned yet, Pinkie Promise.