Spike was always shorter than everypony around him, but he figured that would change when puberty came around. Unfortunately for him, things didn't turn out as planned. But that may change when he meets a stranger along the dark streets of Ponyville.
First please do not take so long to update, I had already thought that this story was canceled. second when we will see scenes xxx. third, the drained part of size and magic, could have been done in a way that was more painful. out of that it was an incredible cap I hope to see as follows. sorry for my bad English
8552619 Sorry! I as I had said I never meant for it to take so long to get another update, I was just dealing with some family/mental issues and getting started in college. I should be able to back on a path of regular installments (already working on the next chapter). There will be some scenes of naughtiness coming up, but I won't give any details yet. Finally, I was a little disappointed in the scene myself, I plan bad planning and just wanting to finish quickly, but the next time will be longer and more detailed than last. Canonically, think of it as Spike getting used to the power. I don't mind the English, I'm just glad someone's willing to critique my story. Thanks!!!
First please do not take so long to update, I had already thought that this story was canceled. second when we will see scenes xxx. third, the drained part of size and magic, could have been done in a way that was more painful. out of that it was an incredible cap I hope to see as follows. sorry for my bad English
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Sorry! I as I had said I never meant for it to take so long to get another update, I was just dealing with some family/mental issues and getting started in college. I should be able to back on a path of regular installments (already working on the next chapter).
There will be some scenes of naughtiness coming up, but I won't give any details yet.
Finally, I was a little disappointed in the scene myself, I plan bad planning and just wanting to finish quickly, but the next time will be longer and more detailed than last. Canonically, think of it as Spike getting used to the power.
I don't mind the English, I'm just glad someone's willing to critique my story. Thanks!!!
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No problem, by the way I have a slight suggestion.
Since in this fic there will be domination, I suggest you apply some dirty language.
especially with characters like rarity and flutershy.
given that they are characters that due to their personality would beat them a lot.
I so hope Spike steals Blueblood's size and shows him Rarity belongs to him!