Alright

Good so far

Interesting approach. Can't wait to see how this continues. Good beginning although the pacing was a bit quick. Keep it up.

Celestia could only shake her head at the seemingly obvious situation. “She has lost the will to go on, to live. She no longer cares what becomes of her because she has nothing left to lose.” The two sisters sat in silence for a few moments. Each one going over the situation again and again in their heads. They came to the same conclusion. That Chrysalis most likely did not pose any threat. The diarchs looked to one another and Luna spoke first.

Bingo! Give the princess a prize!! Now, let's see what happens to my favorite monarch.

Chrysalis seemed to passively ponder the question for a second or two. “I believe execution would be the right course of action. I have attempted two takeovers. The first I was able to replace a princess and overpower you Celestia; the second I managed to replace most higher ups in your government including the two of you. Considering these it would lead one to believe I am a dangerous individual, best put to rest before coming up with another plan.”

True but I don't want her gone