Nice chapter keep it up

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Thanks! Is there any particular thing that you liked about it or would like to see more of?

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Just more of rainbow and twilight and maybe spike interaction. I like how rainbow is the one that made the first move. That she get straight to the point, about being a relationship

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Well you should be happy to hear that the next chapter is full of other ponys. For example. The mane six! However I feel it is kinda repetitive.....
Yes, there will be plenty of Spike interaction... But its not exactly positive......
Its been awhile since I read that next chapter... And its a hell of a lot longer... 2,052 words ish.
It has some comedy in it, and of course that meanse pinkie pie.
But I'll let you read it. Its kinda lame if I just talk about the thing...

One chapter will definitely have interaction between Twi and Dashy, if you know what I mean!

She was a tiny bit antisocial so she never really picked up the idea that diarys had no magic in them, unless you use it as a Holocaust for a scary way to communicate to people after you almost die.

I believe this was a harry potter reference but I think you ment horcrux not holocaust that is something completely different