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Thanks! I have never heard of Scratch 21 but now I will search them out! Thanks for reading!

Hello, a few months ago in a Reddit thread I said I would check out your story after I finished Horizons, and I am so glad I added it to my list and finally caught up!
There are a few rough patches with grammar, but they are easy to overlook with a great story panning out. Also, your writing has improved very much since chapter one.
The protagonist and character development are what really set it apart from other fics I've read though. Cal is easily my favorite character so far, I believe you mentioned earlier that you based him off of a real friend you have, I too have a long-time friend that behaves in almost exactly the same manner maybe less children showing up but still a stunning resemblance.
I also love the recurring theme of Joey and Cal destroying every place they spend the night. You have brought me many laughs and smiles.

Anyway, you have a great story here and I look forward to the next chapter!

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Hello Banana Bag! Thank you for the kind words! Thanks to the help of good friends, I have managed to somehow make something readable lol. I'm so happy that someone finally caught on to the joke about Joey and Cal's sleeping quarters always being doomed to some form of destruction, be it at their own hooves or otherwise. I have zero plans for this story to end anytime soon, but production has slowed a bit due to work. I work in a tourist town and my work varies month to month. soon i will be back to my once per month schedule and hopefully put out more than one per month if i can! Be sure to always check the bottoms of the chapters as well, I have a nasty habit of sneaking in art work there :p

Thanks again,
Rocco.