After the defeat of the caribou and the toppling of their empire, the citizens of Equestria try to pick up the pieces. However, the road to recovery is not as easy for some as it is for others.
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Hey Schorl...
Where's the next chapter?
The rhyme's a bit weak, but yes.
Who lives in Our Town, no doubt.
Or not.
I suppose any motivation is good.
I, don't see how, but OK.
BreastS.
No. Stop it. Bad Schrol. No tormenting yourself.
Quality is more important to me that quantity. I trust you to know what you're doing.
Poor Trixie, she literally is in out of her depth here.
Usually stories involving the fall are very hit or miss but this one is well written. Has good pacing and doesn't makd me feel ashamed to be a male hahah
I'm interesting to see how this turns out.
Interesting! I've been lurking around enough and thought I should finally comment.
I'm curious where you'll go with this and how Sunset gets involved. Was surprised to see the zebras involved, especially in such large numbers. I'd assume it'd be more like one zebra for a bunch of ponies, kinda like our version of the foster system where there's far greater need than support, which just puts stress on everyone and makes it easier to fall through the cracks (wondering if that might hapen to Trixie)
The aftermath of the Fall is a very interesting premise and I'm looking forward to seeing what's next.
Please update.
Been over a year, any chance of some updates soon?
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I really have to apologize... Yes, I will update on this story, though I'm not sure if it will be soon. While this is no excuse, I will explain what lead to the long absence from this story. As I was making this, my anniversary for Bruised Apples came up, and I wanted to make the story "Meet Thy Maker" at that time. I did, and finished it, and I think it came out well, but after that I started to feel like I was neglecting my other story setting, "Equestria Trainers' Society". I wanted to make something for that before I continued, but then I started hitting snag after snag and... well I'm further behind than I thought I would be.
I will get back to this story, as I feel it is on that should be told, but I have no set schedule for it.
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Well take your time mate. I'll be here waiting
What's more risky is trying to make a rhyme out of that. All seriousness though, you did an excellent job making us see the world through Trixie's anxious condition. We feel how she doesn't actually see any of the civilians around her as a threat, nor is she angry at anyone. She just can't face social interaction right now.
You really captured the disproportionate relief from just a minor correcting adjustment to a person's body. Two weeks ago I had to get my ears cleaned out just because the waxy build up and pressure on one side of my head was making me absolutely miserable. Not comparable to what's going on in this story, I know, but what I was able to completely understand why Trixie felt so relieved even when the problem hadn't even been fully solved yet.
This must be such a temptation for Equestria, with it having been made apparent to everyone how much can be done, and how much they can be made to accept, thanks to magical medication. There's probably a huge racket for any kind of anti-depressants. Ideas like this are why I'm really captivated by the Cthulu mythos, Warhammer's Chaos, Bioshock, We Happy Few, and the Fall of Equestria setting; as well as human augmentation in settings like X-COM, Deus Ex, and Wolfenstein. The idea of people as machines, moddable and programmable.
Just like the Orks. The Orks like to weaponize everything they touch.
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At least 40k Orks are too dumb for this level of shit. Would rather be dealing with a 30 caliber toaster than having your entire culture be turned into a bastardized degenerate version of itself.