300 years ago, humanity wiped itself out, leaving behind a single nano-enhanced soldier. Suicidal, dangerous and no longer human, he ends up in Equestria, just when something big is about to go down - can one freaky guy, make a difference?
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AND THE PLOT... gets less interesting.
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The Alicorn OC completely ruined what little interest I had left in this story. Now Im just reading to see how much worse it will get, instead of hoping it gets better.
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Yeah, NOW I know how cliché that bastard was (and he will get even more cliché at the end) – all I can say is that this was the first thing I ever wrote (pony or no-pony) and it seemed like a good idea at the time.
Like I said, this story could use a whole re-write, and I’m very well aware of that – but it probably won’t happen – anytime soon, at least (I’m busy trying to work on a sequel – hopefully, of much higher quality – but it is a long way from completion as well).
the captain
the current
Hoops
the captain
a country
ordered
millenia
Stop her, clan!
the princess
to the moon..........
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.................much wow, very yes!
The pacing is too fast, a lot of things don't make sense, and now some random Alicorn came outta nowhere. Can't continue the story at this point.