300 years ago, humanity wiped itself out, leaving behind a single nano-enhanced soldier. Suicidal, dangerous and no longer human, he ends up in Equestria, just when something big is about to go down - can one freaky guy, make a difference?
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Damn the plot is falling apart, before it was good be now is meh really shadow ninja
Hmm...
Celestia fighting against ANY kind of unicorn would be so onesided to be not even funny... This was written after Twilight's Kingdom so it should have kept in mind that 4 alicorn are roughly equivalent to ALL of Equestria plus Discord... No way this "Shadow clan" could be a match for Celestia... [The Shadowdancer ok... maybe...the common rabble? no way.] Then the rest... meh... is really going badly. Additionally... there is the BIG usual issue of Discord... where is he?
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Well, on the one hand, this seems correct but on the other…
Unfortunately, the show is very inconsistent on the matter of alicorn power… And from the story’s POV:
All the above combined, should make this fight a little more believable
As for the Discord… honestly, I skipped him on purpose, just couldn’t find an explanation for why he would be absent . Although, I may fix that during the revision.