Rainbow Dash gets eaten by her friend's pets
Pinkie seemed rather optimistic about this. I couldn't tell if she was supposed to be sad in some parts or not?
A bit of minus points for that X3.
But that's just cause how I am, I'd have to have an established story somewhere to accept that one friend would just let another get eaten. xP
Something I'd like to see in future chapters is an internal view and detailed digestion for RD.
Pinkie seemed rather optimistic about this. I couldn't tell if she was supposed to be sad in some parts or not?
A bit of minus points for that X3.
But that's just cause how I am, I'd have to have an established story somewhere to accept that one friend would just let another get eaten.
xP
Something I'd like to see in future chapters is an internal view and detailed digestion for RD.