When a hero's true colors are shown, the ones who are there for you will do anything for vengeance.
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Well done so far. I rate this story 5\5 mustaches
and because I have never been first before I must say it...
FIRST!!!
7825932 Glad you like my story so far. Have there been any moments that you really enjoyed, or stood out in some way?
7826628 well the emotional side of this story really stands out, like it has been written by someone that has experienced the emotions expressed.
7837160 Truth is, I've never actually experienced those emotions myself. I've always thought about treating the right girl that way, and I'm simply giving that happiness to Indominus since he has been through my kind of loneliness, only worse. I don't know what it's like to be loved the way Indominus loves Rainbow or how she loves him, but that is how I would treat the one girl I would have for life. I'm just giving another lonely creature that wonderful love so that he can live a happier life.
7841352 I feel you, I do some times imagen my self in some of those situations to remove myself from the monotony that is my kind of lonely life. (sigh) but we must live on... so... any jammy hints for the future of this story?
7844661 Uh Uh Uh, can't disclose too much about the future of my sequel. That would be spoiling the surprise. I can tell you though, that Indominus is going to have to deal with a true physical, mental and emotional struggle.