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TyrannosaurusVenom
I'm new at writing stories, but I want to give it my best. I'll take all the positive feedback I can get, and hope everyone likes my stories.
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Oh, I'm excited to see where this goes from here
, even though there were hints in the description...
7697418 Oh trust me, the description merely scratches the surface of what I've got in mind for this story.
I knew eventually that Rainbow was going to eat meat...but it was still surprising for some reason.
Nonetheless, it was still cute! 
No words just beautiful
7723559 Was there any part of this beautiful chapter that you really liked out of all the sweet moments?
The ending of the chapter when they slow dance till they go to sleep knowing that their love is forever.
*squee*
So adorable! The singing overwhelmed me in happiness, and I like how you included music from Beauty and the Beast. It seems appropriate since Rainbow is like Beauty and Indominus is like the Beast. 
7728314 I tried to find the perfect music from Beauty and the Beast, and that tune felt so perfect for a slow dance between them.
I wanted to show everyone that Indominus is not a monster, beneath those scales and teeth lurks the soul of a caring dinosaur.
Were there any moments between Rainbow and Indominus that you especially enjoyed in this chapter of feels, happiness and singing?
I promise myself that I wouldn't cry.
7735242 I guess the sweet chapters are enough to bring out the feels in anyone. Did you have a part that you really liked?
7737487 I can't decide. They're all beautiful.
Just out of curiosity readers, how do all of you feel about Rainbow having Indominus as her stallion? I know he's not the most common creature to be paired with Rainbow Dash, but how does he stack up against all the others that Rainbow has been paired with? I know Indominus isn't perfect or a pony, but he's perhaps the only one that could be there for Rainbow and help her out of trouble instead of constantly needing to be saved.
7728490 Ugh, I don't know!
I liked every moment! 
7737506 Indominus seems to be a good fit for Rainbow. He will do anything to make sure Rainbow and his family is safe. Yes, he's a dinosaur, but that makes the pairing unique. I mean, how many ponies can say that they have an intelligent and powerful dinosaur as a husband?
7737506 I'm not a reader but I have to give credit to you for your originality. It's really different, so kudos to you for thinking way outside of the box on this one.
7779414 I try my best each time. I always try to find the right way to blend in the many different characters and make them work with the story.
7779507 A very good aim, it's not easy to do but always worth the effort.
If there was a hall of fame in the arcade, Indominus Rex would be up there!
My heart nearly exploded from cuteness and my face hurts from how long I was smiling!
I loved the encore, I wasn't expecting for Discord to join and sing to Fluttershy! 
7808847 I ship Fluttercord just as well as Raindominus. Ever since I saw the season 6 finale and how Discord held her, I thought it was time he told Fluttershy what he thinks about her.
Andrew W.K. had the perfect song for that moment. What did you think of the other songs that were included, I'm a Believer and Hard Rock Hallelujah? Did they bring as much excitement and cuteness as the encore?
7808917 As soon as I saw the song title "I'm a Believer", I was excited! I knew it was going to be good. It was heartwarming, mainly because I made me think about how they felt in the first story.They saw each other and became deeply affectionate with one another. Now, here they are, singing as a married couple.
Hard Rock Hallelujah was excellent! The lyrics fit with the characters, it kind of made your heart race, and it was catchy! I'm not a fan of heavy metal, but I would be cheering if I was there! 
Well done so far. I rate this story 5\5 mustaches
and because I have never been first before I must say it...
FIRST!!!
7825932 Glad you like my story so far. Have there been any moments that you really enjoyed, or stood out in some way?
7826628 well the emotional side of this story really stands out, like it has been written by someone that has experienced the emotions expressed.
7837160 Truth is, I've never actually experienced those emotions myself.
I've always thought about treating the right girl that way, and I'm simply giving that happiness to Indominus since he has been through my kind of loneliness, only worse. I don't know what it's like to be loved the way Indominus loves Rainbow or how she loves him, but that is how I would treat the one girl I would have for life. 
I'm just giving another lonely creature that wonderful love so that he can live a happier life.
7841352 I feel you, I do some times imagen my self in some of those situations to remove myself from the monotony that is my kind of lonely life. (sigh) but we must live on... so... any jammy hints for the future of this story?
7844661 Uh Uh Uh, can't disclose too much about the future of my sequel. That would be spoiling the surprise. I can tell you though, that Indominus is going to have to deal with a true physical, mental and emotional struggle.
7846035 what could that be... kids? No ... hum... devorce? ... spec ops training? .... hum... righting a fan fic... errr... i got nothing.
Soarin is going to do something...I hope stealing the Arkenstone ring isn't one of them.
7848750 The next few chapters will reveal the details. I'm glad you're still supporting my story, unlike all the people that keep disliking it for whatever reason. It means a lot to have support from readers that like my tales and look forward to the new ones.
7848846 I'm glad to be supporting you.
I'm honestly attached to the characters, especially the dinosaurs. The emotions seem genuine and the events in each story are touching, but also intense. The pacing is not too fast nor too slow so you're able to pull your audience in and kept them on the hook.
7849228 Thanks Grey Goat Mom, I needed to hear that.
I feel like the destruction of the locker room will cause more problems between Rainbow and the Wonderbolts. Soarin will most likely know who did the damage and will probably try to accuse Rainbow of property damage. He might try to harm her more physically rather than just make her screw up her routines, especially when the others aren't around. This could make Indominus' rage increase to the point of actually wanting to kill them. If he does get to that point, the only pony who could stop him is Rainbow...
Jeez, the Wonderbolts better be grateful if they don't become carcasses.
7866387 Things are starting to heat up in this tale. What did you think of Indominus cutting out the symbol on the jacket and replacing it with Rainbow's real name carved onto his scales?
7867736 I didn't think Indominus would go as far as ripping his own skin off and sewing it on Rainbow's jacket.
It's actually pretty touching in a disturbing way. Despite the jacket's purpose to express Indomimus' vengeance, I think it was also for Rainbow to have something that she can smile about. I'm sure she'll be pleased with the symbol change. 
You know I kinda share the same anger towards the Wonderdorks.
7897146 Finally, someone who shares in my distaste for them.
Now I'm really curious how Dash, Scoots, and the others will react to this.
7897229 There's definitely going to be some explaining. How did you feel about Indominus's rampage and the little background behind his power?
Indominus' rampage was unsettling, it kind of scared me. The background behind his power...it scares me even more! I have a feeling that the anger that he used during his rampage, will more likely make him become corrupted in the future. Then again, the support of his friends and family might reduce the chance, too.
I'm starting to think that this story shares my same hatred for those who make fun of Rainbow Dash by calling her that stupid name.
Readers, I have to ask all of you something, and I want you to be completely honest with me.
How many of you actually want to see Indominus take his vengeance out on the Wonderbolts and tear them to pieces? I've felt that the Wonderbolts deserve at least something harsh for how they've treated Rainbow Dash, and constantly calling her that horrid nickname. Do all of you feel the same, and want to see vengeance carried out by a hybrid dinosaur with the power to make them pay?
7939301 On a scale of a brat to an evil tyrant, the Wonderbolts are jerks. Personally, I wouldn't wish death on jerks...It's kind of extreme, though it's also sort of understandable. There are very few times where I want the 'antagonist' to die, usually if the character has killed or wants to kill many people who don't deserve it. They deserve some sort of punishment, but nothing close or worse than Scootaloo's biological parents' fate. Like a few wounds and some broken bones could be enough. Soarin wants to make Rainbow's life miserable, but it doesn't seem like he wants to kill her or anypony else. I don't think the other Wonderbolts want her dead either.
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She now has her confidence back and she's determined to show the Wonderbolts what she's got!
Wow, Rainbow is considering to let Indominus kill Soarin if he goes too far, though I'm not sure how she will feel if Indominus tried to kill the other Wonderbolts. I'm actually feeling a bit unsettled now...
But at the same time, I'm glad Rainbow is happy about the new design and how Indominus has her back!
I wish this should've happens on the episode.
Why do I feel the Wonderbolts are going to destroy the Arkenstone ring? It obviously means a lot to Rainbow (and Indominus) which means they can serve her (them) a dessert full of despair... Afterwards, the King with no master will prepare a recipe for disaster.
7985606 Delicious comment Grey Goat Mom. Did you by chance, happen to enjoy the torment that Indominus brought upon Rainbow's old bullies and Shitfire?
7985786 I did enjoy the torment of Rainbow's old bullies and Spitfire, despite the fact I didn't fully process that Indominus was actually going to kill the bullies.
I was pretty shocked...
7991097 But Indominus did what he went to Cloudsdale for in the the first place: he ended the origin of Rainbow's nickname. With Rainbow's old bullies, gone, that just leaves the Wonderbolts. Then once they're done, 'Rainbow Crash' will cease to exist.
DAMN YOU WONDERBOLTS!! WHY YOU ALL ALWAYS RUINING LIVES?!!