When a hero's true colors are shown, the ones who are there for you will do anything for vengeance.
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Very nice chapter, looking good.
>edgy anime one-liners every few sentences
>"I WILL NOT LET YOU HURT MY FAMILY etc." said for the nth time
>power ballads
>Rainbow Dash becoming a dinosaur for some reason and roaring which was intended to be powerful and emotional but instead came off as cheesy and strange tbh
>prideful roaring like this is The Lion King
>shit that legit might've come straight out of Dragon Ball Z and/or Evangelion I've seen that shit before my friend FUSION HA
>overdramatic exposition/everything else
>BOLD TEXT EVERYWHERE
>that picture
>ten million hours in microsoft paint tag intensifies
>that paint graffiti
>super saiyan dino Dash recolor
>Gimp and Paint.net are free and yet people still use Microsoft Paint
>inb4 these comments are referred to as "insults" and "unconstructive criticism" when even constructive criticism was considered heinous and ignorable
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look, I'm trying not to be a dick here, but c'mon son if this isn't a pastiche to anime in some way and is completely and utterly serious then fucking hell - I understand this is your story, and fair play to you - but you kinda flipflopped everything that made the first one what it was
all I can say is: you watch too much anime m8
"Come on Rainbow Dash, DODGE," Indominus called out from seeing his girl getting attacked.
More DBZ abridged references.