Clockwork has admired his older brother Playthrough for as long as he can remember but as they grew older that admiration became something else. During a visit to his brother's house things get steamy in the shower.
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this fiction is decent however it's not that bad. The only thing I do like is that you did some details in both chapters. However outside you need to put in weather details if you can. Also Time is also a need as well. Look you have 57 likes and 7 dislikes it's a big start. Please don't cancel a good opportunity of this fiction.
This is, without a doubt, one of my favorite stories on fimfiction.
7743009 Oh, wow. That really means a lot to me. Thank you for the compliment. I almost had to cancel it due to a misunderstanding so I'm glad I got that cleared up.
Do you mind if I ask why you like it?
this fiction is decent however it's not that bad. The only thing I do like is that you did some details in both chapters. However outside you need to put in weather details if you can. Also Time is also a need as well. Look you have 57 likes and 7 dislikes it's a big start. Please don't cancel a good opportunity of this fiction.
Absolutely love this story. It’s hard to find stories like this.
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Thank you.
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You're welcome