Twilight catches her "Star" pupil in the shower doing something, something that makes the Princess of Friendship act out in a way she never thought she would.
Dipping your toes in with a clop story first eh? I can relate. Quite an interesting story so far. Could maybe use a bit more humor to lighten the mood but over all not a bad story. Nice Evangelion reference at the end.
Rather good story, fun sexytimes, and interesting reversal of the teacher/student roles for the two 'Lights
Only complaint is that i was very disappointed in Spike's behavior ...
...pancakes should never go to waste like that!
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Thank you for commenting and yes, I know, it's a tragic waste of pancakes.
And I just noticed there didn't seem to be that many people shipping Twi and Star, so I figured I should contribute.
I'm already fast thinking what I can do to expand upon this and if I might try bringing any of the other Mane 6 into this equation.
The twistar is real with this fic, keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter.
Dipping your toes in with a clop story first eh? I can relate. Quite an interesting story so far. Could maybe use a bit more humor to lighten the mood but over all not a bad story. Nice Evangelion reference at the end.
It's simple for Spike: Tell Rarity or move on it's one or the other.