Is Celestia really saying he's evil just because he's able to kill her?

Shesh Celestia's a pussy.

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Lol, not what i was going for, But she does seen to use the Elements as a crutch doesn't she?

7565352 Just remember, this is set in the time with Sombra, anything dark and creepy will scare them

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You may want to break up your paragraphs a bit more, long paragraphs spark TLDR syndrome like nothing else...

Other than that, I'm looking forward to what's coming...

I hope this isn't going where I think it's going if so it's going to be boring I have seen it too many times let me guess the evil won the battle now he is going to do something bad and somehow down the line princess turned him to Stone 1000 years later he breaks out but by this point he's beaten the evil Within him and everybody still thinks he's evil and he tries to do something to prove it's not that are you going to take it the other way he's going to be evil which is going to be worse than the other one well we'll see in the next couple chapters

Don't get me wrong I liked it up to this point but once that stuff in the head started it started getting predictable now if he stays good through the whole thing that's not predictable I haven't seen that and I'm not trying to bad mouth you or anything like that I'm just offering some criticism something to help you get better something most people look for I'm not going to be one of those people that tell yo it's good when it's not

7565508 Yes.

There were a few spelling errors spread through this chapter. I think I'm not going to bother pointing everything out. It'd be a pain in the butt and I don't want to do it right now.

7565508 It is her greatest weakness.