8875199 I have checked over the chapters at least three times now and I can't seem to find where they refer to her as Flurry Heart or princess. Of course it could just be me being stupid, again. Unless you meant the narrative calling her Flurry Heart while at the same time her friends call her Skyla.
8895134 i did not realize some one is narrative in the story. when the narrative calling her Flurry Heart while at the same time her friends call her Skyla it got me a confused . sorry about that.
"Not here, all natural." Silver just gave a face that said 'really?' "Now come on, we're almost back to the castle." Flurry Heart broke into a gallop and quickly outpaced Silver who tried to shamble as fast as his hooves could muster.
Oh Silver, it only you could see what the weather is like in our 🌎 .
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Thanks. If there's anything that you want to ask or point out, just do so as feedback is always appreciated.
This was a good chapter, will be looking forward to the next one that followes.
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Thank you. I appreciate any and all feedback on my stories, after all, that is the best way for any writer to improve.
do they know they are friends with princess Flurry Heart .
sometime they call her Skyla and sometime Flurry Heart.
good story.
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I have checked over the chapters at least three times now and I can't seem to find where they refer to her as Flurry Heart or princess. Of course it could just be me being stupid, again. Unless you meant the narrative calling her Flurry Heart while at the same time her friends call her Skyla.
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i did not realize some one is narrative in the story.
when the narrative calling her Flurry Heart while at the same time her friends call her Skyla it got me a confused .
sorry about that.
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It's alright. I get confused sometimes myself, and I'm the author. So no one's infallible.
Really enjoying it so far. Looking forward to more.
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I agree to much suspense
Oh Silver, it only you could see what the weather is like in our 🌎 .
The the suspense is starting to hurt
Is there any chance of this getting an update, or is it pretty much cancelled?