I let you suprise me about how the romance happens.
I just hope it isn't him acting as obvious as possible about his potential crush, which is probably causing characters like Sunset or Applejack to smirk at him and teasing him about liking Rainbow Dash, maybe even one of them forcing him to advance on her or stuff like that.
I mean the usually thing would be, that he is the one who has the crush, and not what I would like too, that not the main char is starting in a romance. (I hope you can understand what I hopefully right in a way it makes sense).

I know what kind of person he is supposed to be with his table top gaming and stuff like that, but I hope he isn`t the typicall wimp, and that Rainbow has actually a small change in her personality, if she should notice or even return the feelings. I just think she wouldn't need to look cool in those moments too.

I haven't read it yet, i'm just curious if you already can give me some sort of all-clear signal.

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I just hope it isn't him acting as obvious as possible about his potential crush, which is probably causing characters like Sunset or Applejack to smirk at him and teasing him about liking Rainbow Dash, maybe even one of them forcing him to advance on her or stuff like that.

Maybe you meant "oblivious" and not "obvious"? Well, while I might write some teasing, my plan did not involve forcing Scroll Pen to advance on Rainbow Dash.

I mean the usually thing would be, that he is the one who has the crush, and not what I would like too, that not the main char is starting in a romance. (I hope you can understand what I hopefully right in a way it makes sense).

If I get it right, your preference is when the main character starts the romance? I'm not giving any spoilers on how romance starts. But I am not writing the "usual thing" you described.

I know what kind of person he is supposed to be with his table top gaming and stuff like that, but I hope he isn`t the typicall wimp, and that Rainbow has actually a small change in her personality, if she should notice or even return the feelings. I just think she wouldn't need to look cool in those moments too.

I hope Chapter 1 reassures you he is not the typical wimp, specifically the part where he has a P.E. class. And I am doing my best to implement what you said on Rainbow Dash as well - your thoughts on that matter coincide with mine.

I haven't read it yet, i'm just curious if you already can give me some sort of all-clear signal.

Hmm, well, that's my all-clear signal, I think.

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If I get it right, your preference is when the main character starts the romance? I'm not giving any spoilers on how romance starts. But I am not writing the "usual thing" you described.

I noticed my sentence was messed up.
I more or less meant, that I actually hope Dash is showing interest to, or is actually the one starting the relationship.
I can only say that in all the storys I had read, it is usually the main char that is getting all the teasing (which isn't always bad) and that characters like Rainbow Dash can't act different than being awesome and bragging pretty much...kind of perfect I mean.

I hope Chapter 1 reassures you he is not the typical wimp, specifically the part where he has a P.E. class. And I am doing my best to implement what you said on Rainbow Dash as well - your thoughts on that matter coincide with mine.

Yes till now he doesn`t looks like a wimp and I like it that you think the same about Rainbow, or have similar thoughts on the matter.

I don't want to sound like I would whine about everything, but I like to think if I don't say anything, I don't have a chance to get what I would like to see. While the author has the say in how it has to be, often enough it happens in the same way, and that is the main Char bein some sort of puppet and....well I explained it already.

Hmm, well, that's my all-clear signal, I think.

Okay sorry, I actually thought I had read it already, I guess I remembered something different, but I`m going to do it now.

I tell you how much I liked it afterwards, but I don't judge it to much till after 5 chapters at least.

Friendship Games

I need to finally watch it, even if I don't like that they can still transform that easy without the pony Twilight, even when they had no magic before, and stuff like that.

Apparently, prefers sports over academics, but will have to see later, he decided, turning away and taking his seat.

I like his analytic thinking.

"The fact we sat together doesn't make me her friend yet," the teenager replied. "Only an acquaintance. I do not call people "friends" on the first day I meet them. Sorry if I offended you."

I really like his personality and that he isn't drolling over any girl or Rainbow as if he just discovered what girls are.

I really enjoyed it, and made sure not to judge before I understood the situation, sometimes I can jump the gun if I read something that looks like something that already happened the bad way.

I need to stop worrying about my time, but learning, and searching for work, doing what I want, and other stuff is a bit much lately. The story just made me remember what I actually wanted to change for myself, but can`t exaclty do it because I still have to find a different time when I want to do certain stuff. I would play basketball if I would know enough people that want to play it, and I kind of want to run more too, but I start to understand why some people can`t exactly mae youtube videos because they have to learn or study.

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I noticed my sentence was messed up.

I more or less meant, that I actually hope Dash is showing interest to, or is actually the one starting the relationship.

Answering that one would mean spoilers, no matter what answer I give. Sorry.

I can only say that in all the storys I had read, it is usually the main char that is getting all the teasing (which isn't always bad) and that characters like Rainbow Dash can't act different than being awesome and bragging pretty much...kind of perfect I mean.

That's a trap I'm trying to avoid; will see how it goes, since this is my first romance fic.

I don't want to sound like I would whine about everything, but I like to think if I don't say anything, I don't have a chance to get what I would like to see. While the author has the say in how it has to be, often enough it happens in the same way, and that is the main Char bein some sort of puppet and....well I explained it already.

Main character being a puppet is not what I like either.

Okay sorry, I actually thought I had read it already, I guess I remembered something different, but I`m going to do it now.

I tell you how much I liked it afterwards, but I don't judge it to much till after 5 chapters at least.

Happens I'd appreciate any feedback, even before the "five chapters" mark. (Given how I planned the story, it definitely should be more than five.)

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I need to finally watch it

it's preferable if you did; the plot occurs after the events of the movie, and references to it are spoilery.

I like his analytic thinking.

Thanks

I really like his personality and that he isn't drolling over any girl or Rainbow as if he just discovered what girls are.

Sometimes it's funny when that happens, but yeah, I didn't want that either.

I really enjoyed it, and made sure not to judge before I understood the situation, sometimes I can jump the gun if I read something that looks like something that already happened the bad way.

It happens; I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. I hope to deliver more high-quality chapters in the future. Thank you for the comment