CLOP - A single hoofstep echoed off the unlit cobblestone.
The Great and Powerful Trixie fears no pony. Trixie is the greatest and most powerful po... illusionist since The Great and Powerful Trixie’s mentor, The Magnificently Unparalleled Hoofdini.
CLOP
The Great and Powerful Trixie neither fears nor needs anypony. Trixie is the Greatest and Most Powerful on her own. She needs nopony.
CLOP
Trixie needs no friends, no family; Trixie doesn’t even need a mentor anymore. Trixie, the Great and Powerful, needs no pony other than The Great and Powerful Trixie... though Trixie is not above occasionally enjoying the company of others. Peasants and minions are pleasant on occasion.
CLOP
Yes, The Great and Powerful Trixie does right by The Great and Powerful Trixie.
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The Great and Powerful Trixie attended the Canterlot School for Uniquely Gifted Unicorns, on a scholarship no less. Few in history have ever claimed such a feat. And NONE of them came from an orphanage.
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Fewer still have performed a half dozen feats of magic never before seen in front of Princess Celestia of Equestria as The Great and Powerful Trixie had, TWICE!
Thud – Trixie’s hoof struck unlit dirt as she veered off the main path.
But fewer still have banished an ursa, even if it was a baby.
Thud
But The Great and Powerful Trixie has performed and invented magic that has never been performed by another pony, before or after.
Thud
And The Great and Powerful Trixie was by no means great and powerful only in the ways of magic. Trixie designed, built, and pulled her own hoof-made cart with her own four magnificent hoofs.
Thud
The Great and Powerful Trixie hated pulling that cart now that The Great and Powerful Trixie thinks about it. In fact, thinking about it is making Trixie’s eyes water.
Squish – Trixie ignored the mud beneath her hoof.
The Great and Powerful Trixie admits to missing her cape and magic hat. They were passed down by The Magnificent Unparalleled Hoofdini upon his death.
Squish
And his mentor, The Showstopping Clopperfield
Squish
And his mentor, The Mighty Dough Maneing
Squish
And his, The Humorous Inspiring Penn and Tailer
Squish
And theirs…
CLOP - Trixie's hoof landed on a stone doorstep.
It would appear The Great and Powerful Trixie has reached her destination.
A tear plummeted, the sound of its terminal collision with the stone going unnoticed in the light.
Well, as Trixie's mentor use to say, no time like the present to dictate your future.
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“Done,” stated Twilight to herself. Talking to herself was always a bit of an odd pleasure to Twilight; she wished it wasn’t such an ‘odd’ behavior. “Wow it’s almost sunrise. I guess Exotic and Esoteric Earth Pony Magic of the Early Earldom Tribes of the Eastern Equiopian Empire volume II entranced another equine.”
THUD THUD THUD
“What's this, rapping on my chamber door?” giggled Twilight, still giddy from her reading binge.
“You are lucky I was up,” stated Twilight. As she began walking to the door, she opened it casually with the violet glow of practiced magic. “Now how can…” Twilight stopped in her tracks. Before her was the one pony she never expected to see again. Trixie sat with her head held high, sniffling, with tears slowing trickling down her face.
“The Great and Powerful Trixie is... apologetic for having disturbed you at this late hour, Ms. Twilight Sparkle; however, given the, shall we call it a sendoff, I received last time I graced this shanty town with my presence, I thought it might be best to call upon you at a late hour.”
Twilight stared at the teary-eyed mare. “How can I help you, Trixie?”
“I have a rather unique request, Twilight. Perhaps we could talk inside?”
“Of course.” Twilight stepped aside, “Would you like some tea?”
“That,” said Trixie, “Would be much appreciated.”
Twilight closed the door behind Trixie as she entered the well-lit library.
Author's Notes: Chapter zero
You might be thinking that having Authors notes for a chapter zero is kind of odd. And it is. However this story was originally going to be only the chapter zero. The Twilight portion of chapter zero was actually added after I felt the story was complete, just to see how it would turn out. Well I decided to keep that part of the story. My primary pre-reader, alt-tap (http://www.fimfiction.net/user/alt-tap), Felt that the Twilight portion helped fill the fic by adding some additional depth to the story. He was, however, mad at the lack of completion. I showed the story to two other friends and got the same response.
Well after a while I decided to sit down and start writing from where I left off. I was struck with inspiration and look forward to exploring the challenging and, sometimes unrewarding, friendship between the two powerful magicians. This will not be a everypony gets along story.
This story is also a exploration of writing styles for me. The basic, non twilight, chapter one was a little longer and dealt a lot with metaphors. The basic premise was from darkness to light, Trixie will be alright. Now it has become a test to see if Trixie's last real hope will ripen into a fruitful relationship.
Additionally the first chapter was a test in pacing. The sound of Trixie's hoofsteps both pace the story and help reflect Trixie's outward feelings, the facade she presents even to herself. This likely won't continue, but may make a comeback for some specific or very emotional scenes.
While writing chapter 1 I found I wanted to write a large portion of the story as Trixie perceives it. This means that as her perception of the other characters, herself, and the situation alters so will the descriptors. It also means that some of the descriptors will be wrong and it will be up to the reader to decide the details of what is going on, but the reader will know how Trixie views it.
I have several situations planned out, as well as the beginnings of a great and emotional climax. And to be honest it may not be a the happiest of happy ending. But on the other hoof, it might. You will just have to read and find out.