Rarity has a one-night stand with a stallion she met at a club and invited to her bed. Later, she finds out that it being only a one-night stand was a mistake.
When they first met, he told her where he worked, and what he did for a living. If she truly wanted to find him, all she had to do was go to the club manger and describe him and his cutie mark and he would have told her who he was, and given her his contact information, or passed on a letter at least. He's a club DJ, they are not hard to find. Despite this, the story was well done. Good descriptions, and dialogue between the characters. I liked it.
Wait...Princess Celestia's solar movements made mares more likely to become pregnant? What is she, the Princess of Sex? Here I thought that was Mi Amore Cade - sorry, Cadence's job (seeing as how sex is usually considered part of 'love'); guess I was wrong about that.
...Also, I don't know anything about equine biology (let alone their breeding habits), but how can a closer sun contribute to increased pregnancy rates? I thought 'heat season' was a half-yearly event with no set dates, just like how our Easter is a yearly event with no set date (occurring between 21 March and 25 April, on the first Sunday after the first full moon following the northern spring equinox).
7571617 So you're saying cutie marks are like our fingerprints? Except that normal, non-Guard, ponies can keep track of them (whereas only human police are able to identify the owner of a set of fingerprints)? Huh...never thought of them in that way. Neat.
Must make the Guard's job harder, though - unlike fingerprints, you can't leave cutie mark-prints at a crime scene. Sure, there's DNA from dead skin (and fur) cells, but no prints on objects; especially so when considering unicorn (or Faust forbid, alicorn) magic. How would they be able to identify the criminal if there's no witnesses, and the criminal was a 'corn, able to commit the crime remotely? I think my love of Ace Attorney is making me think far too deeply into this...
Four fouls? Err...Coco insulting her potential children doesn't seem quite right...yeah. It's a typo, except I don't get how Legion pressed 'u' over 'a' - they're nowhere near close on a QWERTY keyboard; it'd be easier to understand if Legion wrote 'fosls' or 'fozls', since 's' and 'z' are close to 'a'. Hmm...AutoCorrect?
viewing her currant form
Rarity turned into a small, dried fruit? I think you want 'current'.
When they first met, he told her where he worked, and what he did for a living. If she truly wanted to find him, all she had to do was go to the club manger and describe him and his cutie mark and he would have told her who he was, and given her his contact information, or passed on a letter at least. He's a club DJ, they are not hard to find.
Despite this, the story was well done. Good descriptions, and dialogue between the characters. I liked it.
Wait...Princess Celestia's solar movements made mares more likely to become pregnant? What is she, the Princess of Sex?
Here I thought that was
Mi Amore Cade- sorry, Cadence's job (seeing as how sex is usually considered part of 'love'); guess I was wrong about that....Also, I don't know anything about equine biology (let alone their breeding habits), but how can a closer sun contribute to increased pregnancy rates? I thought 'heat season' was a half-yearly event with no set dates, just like how our Easter is a yearly event with no set date (occurring between 21 March and 25 April, on the first Sunday after the first full moon following the northern spring equinox).
7571617 So you're saying cutie marks are like our fingerprints? Except that normal, non-Guard, ponies can keep track of them (whereas only human police are able to identify the owner of a set of fingerprints)?
Huh...never thought of them in that way. Neat.
Must make the Guard's job harder, though - unlike fingerprints, you can't leave cutie mark-prints at a crime scene. Sure, there's DNA from dead skin (and fur) cells, but no prints on objects; especially so when considering unicorn (or Faust forbid, alicorn) magic. How would they be able to identify the criminal if there's no witnesses, and the criminal was a 'corn, able to commit the crime remotely?
I think my love of Ace Attorney is making me think far too deeply into this...
Four fouls? Err...Coco insulting her potential children doesn't seem quite right...yeah.
It's a typo, except I don't get how Legion pressed 'u' over 'a' - they're nowhere near close on a QWERTY keyboard; it'd be easier to understand if Legion wrote 'fosls' or 'fozls', since 's' and 'z' are close to 'a'. Hmm...AutoCorrect?
Rarity turned into a small, dried fruit? I think you want 'current'.