***SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS!!!***

About the eyes. Welp, I like the red eyes, so they're red. This here story is made by me, and I like the sexy red eyes. Magenta's fine, as you can see in JJ's cover pic I copied and downloaded and used for my own purposes.

And that's all I have to say about that.trailblazersblog.dallasnews.com/files/import/4466-hanks%20-%20forrest%20gump.jpg

Well, this was... Ah, uhm... Well, I suppose it was alright...

Oh, who the hell am I kidding, you did freaking great! A-grade work!

Also, "Sweater puppies". I'm using that.

Bits of the dialogue at the start were a bit... messy, but it wasn't so bad. You easily made up for it with the rest of the story.

804785 Danke, glad you enjoyed it! And you say the dialouge was messy? How so? You do understand that Marcus is one snide bastard?

I have come to expect some good work from you, friend, and this one is no different! And I do have to agree; Vinyl with red eyes is the best Vinyl. Never cared for the "magenta eyes" that other authors use. Magenta is the color of Rainbow Dash's eyes, not Vinyl's.

Really cannot wait to see if you release more!

Oh, and if I can ever get work to stop working me to the bone, I might finish that Lyra one and send it to ya.

841693 Okay! I'm not too worried. I actually have a story worked out for these 6 chapters, but the ladies are basically interchangeable!

my name is marcus...i like this clop

At least include a human tag or other, I dislike to see stories like this while browsing.Thank you.