Dark Light

by John the brony and yknow

Dark Light: I

Author's Note:

Dark Light is an OC made by me:

She's a mare
She's Dark gray
She's got a dark blue mane
Her cutie mark is a Ruby
She's an unicorn

Sitting on a chair at home, is a pony called Dark Light, reading about spells and magic in the night, her only source of light is a nearby candle, her house is very dark, and is very far away from town, although she goes there from time to time to visit her friends, though not so often.

Her daily life is a bit boring, always at home with nothing exciting to do. She oftenly sits in the couch and stares at the wall thinking about her life, what she lived, what she will live and how she lives actually, when she thinks of the past she always gets melancholic, and desires to go back in time and live a happy life again, when she thinks of the future she always gets scared and paranoiac, because she thinks of the thousands of hundreds of possibilities that the future holds, but it is worst when she thinks about the present, and the way she lives.

Ever since she was a kid, Dark Light had a lot of interest in magic and books, and when she was old enough, she left her parent’s house to keep studying and move forward, but there is something missing, she isn’t moving forward, she has been stuck in a static and constant way of life for roughly three years, she of course didn’t mind at all, she was doing what she liked, but the fact of not doing progress in any way worries her so much that she feels like she’s been killed from the inside every time she thinks about her life, Is she doing something wrong? Is there something missing in her life that she hasn’t discovered? Probably, there is always something that you don’t know.

With that in mind, this very day she is sitting there at the couch, she will do something for herself, to be better and to move forward in her life, she will have to go out and discover the world, it will be hard for her, but she knows she won’t regret it, this is not living, and she must change that, there are a lot of opportunities out there and a lot of ponies she can know, things to discover, new cultures, new places, new ways to see the world, different perspectives.

And to do so, she will wait untill tomorrow.

Comments

[great and powerful spike]

Maybe try working on putting some more work into introducing Dark Light. Like explaining what she looks like in the chapter instead of in the notes at the beginning. You also seem to write in third person, maybe try putting some first person in by having Dark light think or say something that lets us readers know how she feels instead of an author explaining everything. First person is just my personal preference though, you can write in third person if you are used to that.