After a massive explosion rocks the world destroying a town the UN send in a private army to check it out.
Editor. Please. Get one
Still a good story but hampered by the grammar...
7610429 I do have one who does go over it but she may not be the best of the best.
7610438 ah. Ok
7610438 In that case, get another one to take another look at it to make sure it is at its best. Again, great chapter so far :)
7610429shouldn't of = shouldn't have
Urrrggghhh!
Editor. Please. Get one
Still a good story but hampered by the grammar...
7610429 I do have one who does go over it but she may not be the best of the best.
7610438 ah. Ok
7610438
In that case, get another one to take another look at it to make sure it is at its best. Again, great chapter so far :)
7610429
shouldn't of = shouldn't have
Urrrggghhh!