Twilight is in need of her stallion. Unluckily for her, her coltfriend Flash is away. Luckily for her, his friend Thunderlane is ready to fill in for that position. In more ways than one.
getting a name drop, huh? well now i'm kinda obligated to comment, no? well i have to say i'm pleased, even though it IS a bit short. also, while reading this, i was somewhat expecting cloudchaser and/or flitter instead of vinyl and octavia, since they are usually the go to pairing for thunderlande (or rumble), but i can't say i mind it like this. i'm always open for new things
It would be nice to see a chapter where Thunderlane is training Twilight and have Spike catch them. Instead of telling her she's awful for cheating on Flash he'll join in and help Thunderlane pound her good as thank you for his 'advices' to win Rarity over.
Thunderlane is no friend of flash any more. he going to die very soon. twilight going be on front paper as first princess to cheating. or label as ---.
Huh. Seems like I have to work on that. I mean, I was trying to make it shorter, kind of exercising, since someone said that the first chapter of Apple Orchards was too lengthy. I will go over the chapter another time and see if I can squeeze a paragraph or two in. Also glad you liked it!
Spike has not a role assigned as of now, but Spike being a bro to Thunderlane certainly seems interesting. It all really depends if it fits in at the moment. So I'm thinking about it.
It's not that I'm not happy that I have readers, but... if you really don't like cheating (Netorare) then maybe you shouldn't read it. It only gets worse for Flash in the future chapters, believe me. That was also the reason I set up a warning in the Author's Notes in the first chapter. This topic just isn't for everyone.
Honestly, loving this story so far, but now I want to read a longer story about Futa Vinyl slutifying Octavia.
getting a name drop, huh? well now i'm kinda obligated to comment, no? well i have to say i'm pleased, even though it IS a bit short. also, while reading this, i was somewhat expecting cloudchaser and/or flitter instead of vinyl and octavia, since they are usually the go to pairing for thunderlande (or rumble), but i can't say i mind it like this. i'm always open for new things![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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BRAD DOESNT EVEN DESERVE TO LIVE!!!!!!! TWIDASH FOR EVER!!!!!!!!!
It would be nice to see a chapter where Thunderlane is training Twilight and have Spike catch them. Instead of telling her she's awful for cheating on Flash he'll join in and help Thunderlane pound her good as thank you for his 'advices' to win Rarity over.
Thunderlane is no friend of flash any more. he going to die very soon. twilight going be on front paper as first princess to cheating. or label as ---.
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Damn good, or damn bad?![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
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I agree on that one! That would definitely be hot too!![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
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Huh. Seems like I have to work on that. I mean, I was trying to make it shorter, kind of exercising, since someone said that the first chapter of Apple Orchards was too lengthy. I will go over the chapter another time and see if I can squeeze a paragraph or two in. Also glad you liked it!![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
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Spike has not a role assigned as of now, but Spike being a bro to Thunderlane certainly seems interesting. It all really depends if it fits in at the moment. So I'm thinking about it.![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
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It's not that I'm not happy that I have readers, but... if you really don't like cheating (Netorare) then maybe you shouldn't read it. It only gets worse for Flash in the future chapters, believe me. That was also the reason I set up a warning in the Author's Notes in the first chapter. This topic just isn't for everyone.
7434999 i want see Thunderlane die!
http://j5a4.deviantart.com/art/dead-pony-Thunderlane-Sweet-Smile-451918670
This is incredible. Keep it going.
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Just stop reading that ???