Somehow I end up in Gryphonstone.
Other then a few grammartical errors, the story is great. I look forward to what the future holds.
I see potential with this story. I'll be watching.
Not sure if it's a case of English not being your first language, but you should definitely seek out an editor. This has pretry glaring grammar issues.
Other then a few grammartical errors, the story is great. I look forward to what the future holds.
I see potential with this story. I'll be watching.
Not sure if it's a case of English not being your first language, but you should definitely seek out an editor. This has pretry glaring grammar issues.