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Chapter 1: drink time

Authors note: this Is my first published story, so please don't make fun of me :(

. Fires Ablaze was out in ponyville, and she looked HOT. Her Flame red hair shined brightly, giving off a warm glow. Her black coat shined in the light. Her cutie mark, a single flame, shined brightly, while her pitch Black wings gave her a dark glow. Her amulet swung as she walked the amulet to her powers. As she stood outside the door, she heard a beat blasting and her heart skipped a few beats. She sighed and said to herself, "show time..." she pushed open the door to see something that blew her mind.

The inside of the nightclub was flashing strobe and rainbow colors, she looked out at the crowd and giggles as rainbow dash was speeding around, grinding on every-stallion she could find. She saw blaze and stumbled over, obviously drunk already. "Heeeeeeey der blazy. How you doin?" she stumbled and fell, and as she hit the ground, she fell asleep. Blaze kept walking and arrived at the bar. "Vodka. just vodka, nothing else. please.!" she ordered, looking at the crowd. The older bartender rolled his eyes and trotted to the refrigerator to make a drink. He slid it over and tapped her hoof gently. Blaze scanned the crowd and a white stallion caught her eye. He had a short, blonde mane and tail, and he was also wearing a black leather vest. Blaze downed the vodka, ignored the burn, and walked over.

He was sitting in the corner, on a chair that angled him away from the crowd. Blaze walked up and said with confidence, "hey there stallion. I'm Fires Ablaze. Call me Blaze. You are?" The stallion gazed up, blue eyes shining. "Hello. My names Subtle Rampage, but you can call me rampage." blaze nodded and smiled. She pulled up a chair and sat by him, and said quietly, “so Rampage... You single or... “she blushed and looked away, then heard," nah. No mare friend. Why? “Blaze blushed and said, "would you like to go out and hangout?" She got up and looked away, nervous and shy, as she had never asked out anyone before. He stood up and cleared his throat, which made blaze swing around to look at him. "Sal's coffee shop, 8 in the morning?" he smiled warmly at blaze, making her heart beat faster." uh... Umm... Yah! That would be awesome!" her wings fluttered, making a waiter topple over, his drinks covering other ponies. Blaze folded her wings and winked at Rampage, then cantered off away from the pony’s screaming and throwing bottles at her.

As she was leaving she picked up Dash and put her on her back, and flew out. the cool air was refreshing, and she gleefully flew circles until she felt something on her back, and she saw a cyan pony falling, " shiiiiiiit DASH!" she yelled, and nosedived straight for dash, and picked her up as they were about to hit the ground. She brought them back up when dash woke up, groggy and tired. “The fuck...?" she turned her head to scowl at me. “Blaze, the fuck you flying me to?" Blaze just laughed and flew to her small apartment, on the outskirts of ponyville. The insides were Red and Silver, Blazes favorite. Blaze walked into the kitchen and grabbed Dash a glass of water. "Here dash, drink." as soon as it was in front of her dash drank the whole glass and asked for another, moaning and grabbing her head. Blaze just laughed and got her a drink and a bag of ice, and went to turn on some music.

After the music and Dash was fine, Blaze said silently to dash," I have a date tomorrow..." Blaze blushed then jumped as dash screamed and grabbed her cheeks, smooching them together. "OHMYCELESTIA! MY BABYS ALL GROWN UP!" Dash jumped up, Blazes cheeks still in her hoofs, and flew them around the room. "mmmmff. mmmmf... MMMMMMMMMFFFFFF!!" blaze was shouting( or at least trying to ) , trying to get dash to let go of her. Dash dropped Blaze and circled around the apartment, screaming, " I HAVE TO TELL PINKY! WE CAN HAVE A PARTY.... PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARTY TIME!" Dash started Mambo dancing, and seemed to dance with an imaginary partner.Blaze just sat there, and waited till Dash got bored of it. “ hey dash, want to know what he looks like?” that stopped Dash, who flew over and was inches away from Blaze, and asked,” yes!! Yes please pleas-“Blaze stuffed a hoof into her mouth, and said,” he’s a tall, muscular white stallion with a choppy Blonde mane. He wears a leather vest. AND his eyes are Green! “She giggled just thinking about him. Dash laughed and said, “Omg I saw him too! He was there, and I tried dancing with him but he kept saying no, so I started dancing with his friend. I think he got mad…” dash lowered her eyes, and went to move her mane out of her eyes when she saw somthing on her forearm. “OH MY… HE LEFT HIS ADRESS ON MY ARM!!!! I SHOULD GO AND SEE IF HES HOMEEEEEEEE“Dash flew up, and half said goodbye as she flew out of the room, and out into the sky.

Blaze just laughed and got cleaned up, waiting to get tired so she could sleep and be ready for her date tomorrow. Suddenly Dash got a phone call and when she answered she heard a scream and someone yell, “oh my CELESTIA!!! You have a DATE!? I’m so proud! LET’S HAVE A PARTY!!!” Blaze just rolled her eyes and said, “ yes Pinky , I have a date. His Names Subtle Rampage, and i don’t know how old he is… I think around mine. Maybe….” Pinky screamed and said,” im going to plan your party right NOW!” Blaze hung up sighed , tired. She walked over to her bed and flopped down, and immediately fell into a slumber.

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