The world will be shaped by one birth. The darkness will no longer be suppressed, the crystal throne will no longer be empty and one stallion will become the last warrior holding a crystal blade
7987167 thanky you! As a writer I love hearing that people enjoy what I do I think it's rated fairly badly because of my grammar and I'm sorry for that But English not being my mother language(or whatever you call it)it's a bit hard knowing when I do minor grammar failers, anyway thanks for your support
Killing a princess? Bit of a tall order, not to mention the repercussions if she succeeds. This is an interesting read, but just a small note, you could probably expand on descriptions a bit. Preferably during scenarios where conflict is involved, but that's just my opinion. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Don't know why it's rated so bad it's very enjoyable
7987167 thanky you! As a writer I love hearing that people enjoy what I do I think it's rated fairly badly because of my grammar and I'm sorry for that But English not being my mother language(or whatever you call it)it's a bit hard knowing when I do minor grammar failers, anyway thanks for your support
Killing a princess? Bit of a tall order, not to mention the repercussions if she succeeds. This is an interesting read, but just a small note, you could probably expand on descriptions a bit. Preferably during scenarios where conflict is involved, but that's just my opinion. Cant wait for the next chapter.
7989200 thanks for your support. I try to be as descriptive as possible but english only being my second language complicates things a bit
Good so far. Keep it up.