Well, it's all downhill from here.

Well... it's going to build up, you know kinda has to go through the whole build-up, climax, resolution process, so, give it time and I will do my best, I'm still fairly new to writing fics like this and seek to improve over time.

Only a fool would judge a fic by the cover or the first chapter, as they do not clearly know how it is going to go or what is going to happen.

Erm.... I don't know if Comedy is warranted for this fic.

Meh it was okay not really into poor dashie getting kidnapped and all but I'll still like it. But the question is my young man/lady, when's the next chapter?

7185531 Oh... there'll be comedy... well no.. I guess you're right... I'll fix that right now.

7186213 Don't worry, I don't plan on killing anypony that you or any of my readers like, I'm actually going to start taking sumbissions and I will post a blog for those who have an oc that they just give zero fucks about, and I will let them choose how they want to die. What we're mainly going to focus on for the time being is who these mysterious ponies are and why they are doing this to Dash, so it's not just a Grim-Dark, but it will contain a lot of it.

This is my favorite story on fimfic keep up the great work