Sunset orders some of Apple Bloom's potions, with (partially) unexpected results. A companion and sequel to "The Second Floor Club".
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So... Thanks to Trixie, Sunset got herself a half-siren baby! Trixie did something "good" for once!
Why do I think Dagi and Aria will try to seduce our favorite bacon haired futanari?
Whelp, there goes the neighborhood. Hope Sunny is ready for dirty diapers and sleepless nights.
So, Sonata and Sunset baby. It will equally be beautiful as it is terrifying.
Still Trixie royally screwed up this chapter. I know this is more of a clopfic than anything else and isn't too concerned with "realism" or more serious tones, but she needs to be bitch slapped for causing an unintended pregnancy because she was petty and horny.
Trixie... There's a reason you don't mess with stuff you can't read.
Also, that begs a question why did Bloom make fertile potions to send over. I'm sure Sunset will be really happy when she finds out about what happened
7221529 Sunset wondered that very thing in the first chapter. The perils of completionism. And/or living in a clop fic with impregnation themes
awwww
7221597 No complains from me though
O h d e a r m e
I dont get it, the premise with these potions. A fic that leaves a blank in the mind.
I do recognize that sexually is not Boolean and subscribe to the idea, but I believe this detracts from the fic, actually. With this Sunset is not a girl with an extra magical dick anymore, she's a male reader expy. The previous chapter did leave open the possibility of it being a "with humans" issue, but not anymore.
Sure, at least she's not against being touched or made to cum as a woman (Rarity proved that), but it does detract from the clop factor.
The fic is complete and the sequel hasn't been updated in a year, but I'll still finish reading both. I just hope Sunset doesn't stay on only one side of the dicking until the end though, and finds out that she actually likes to receive too.
Once again, not a critique to varied sexualities, just to this instance in a porn story
Helluva hot though, has my like and favorite. Onwards to finishing it, now
Edit after finishing it: Yep, still awesome. Would love to see Sunset taking some in the sequel, but that's about my fetishes.
Please write more?