Mind a suggestion? The way both Fluttershy and Rarity lubricate so quickly seems rather unbelievable. This could be solved by a couple lines, here or there, of Rarity doing *something* to get her engine turning over, more than just the thought of taking a foreign cock from her female best friend without so much as a 'do you mind, darling? Thank you'. Something like her tracing her own breast, giving Sunset a look as she strokes fingers through her groin, etc.

Small addition, but it'd help the suspension of disbelief for your readers (Sure. We've already got magical futa pony cocks on a unicorn-turned-human who's the same colour as a bad spray-tan in California. What's not to disbelieve?). Same with the knowledge that they're doing this in rather public places and have to be aware of interruptions at any given moment.

"Buh," Sunset said to the door, unwilling to mess with success.

Sunset.exe has encountered a problem...

Good to see that Twilight is the Princess of Friendship with Benefits across two realities, now.

7102580 It's certainly fair, though as you say these kinds of things aren't maximally about realism. But there might be reasonable ways to do it without breaking up the pacing I want, which is supposed to feel less deliberate than Second Floor Club at least in these chapters. I'll think it over and see what I can do next time I have time to write.

Wow, Shy was a bit quicker than her counterpart to get herself something.

Then again, it's probably easier to feel comfortable with sex when what you want is attached to someone who trust and are comfortable with.
Ponyshy hasn't seen one of her best friends with a literal fantasy attached to them yet.

Now Apple Bloom's gotta put a new warning on the bottles.

Hrmm... Damn that was nice! Good visuals!....

- 2 downed, 4 to go!

7102580 I made some changes to the chapters based on this. Nothing major but I think it both addressed the point and made the pacing better. Hope you agree.

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Plus my wives, The Dazzlings!

>She didn't through lunch, but it's presence colored her whole day.
-Several errors in that one sentence.