Two twin Brothers have the ability to spawn anything they want from the star wars universe from the galactic republic period. What happens when these two end up in Equestria? And what happens when Celestia despises them as monsters?
The story seems nice and I'm curious to see how Chris will interact with the ponies. Still, Brad seems to be making one bad decision after another as his trigger happy behavior did a lot of property damage and hurt Apple Bloom. Overall, I like the story and hope to see more chapters coming soon.
7598430 Thank you for your criticism i will try and change the story as soon as i can to answer some of your questions. Also if theres other things that i didnt explain in the other chapters feel free to write them down in the comments so that i can make my story better for everybody.
good job bro its a good story
7590370 Thanks
The story seems nice and I'm curious to see how Chris will interact with the ponies. Still, Brad seems to be making one bad decision after another as his trigger happy behavior did a lot of property damage and hurt Apple Bloom. Overall, I like the story and hope to see more chapters coming soon.
The first imperial-I star destroyer was designed and built in the middle of the clone wars despite what the wiki says. just though you should know
7598430 Thank you for your criticism i will try and change the story as soon as i can to answer some of your questions. Also if theres other things that i didnt explain in the other chapters feel free to write them down in the comments so that i can make my story better for everybody.
Can the brothers only summon Clone Wars era stuff or can they do the entire Galactic Civil War? Is it limited to just that one era?
7687933 Only Clone Wars stuff im afraid
7687935 As long as it is cleared up i don't mind.
And hey, it can still be interesting to see what vehicles-soldiers-heroes will be spawned into this story by our two protragonists.